Registered: Jun 2008
Location: Lelystad, Netherlands
Really nice! nothing to moan here
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
OK guys, here we go -> my latest WIP collab with my friend Remi from Norway:
Alan White & DariusX - Another One is Coming (TranceHouse WIP) by DariusX.
Your opinion always counts!!!
Darek
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Nov-07-2013 10:11
Seandroid
Banned
Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Edmonton, Alberta
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
OK guys, here we go -> my latest WIP collab with my friend Remi from Norway:
Alan White & DariusX - Another One is Coming (TranceHouse WIP) by DariusX.
Your opinion always counts!!!
Darek
I absolutely love how punchy the bass line is!
I think the synth in the breakdown that starts at 1:30ish is a little too simple. It doesn't have much character. It's too clean.
I'd actually say the latter half of the track is where it starts to lose direction for me. I had hoped it was going to have a huge impact into something powerful and big but it's very gentle.
It works though. And I mean, it depends what your direction was and where you wanted to take it. It could be very purposeful.
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Originally posted by tehlord
This is something I'm toying with on the Mac.
I may have posted a version of this before, but I'm just fiddling with the balance a little to get an ear on these K271's I'm using. Oddly I've got the K701's as well and although I swear they're better and more detailed I seem to be getting better results on the 271's. Weird.
Anyhoo, just tweaking levels etc before I pull this out into a full track.
That throaty bass line is fucking dope.
Here's what I've got going, I posted an earlier version a while ago but this is approaching full length now.
Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California
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Originally posted by Seandroid
I absolutely love how punchy the bass line is!
I think the synth in the breakdown that starts at 1:30ish is a little too simple. It doesn't have much character. It's too clean.
I'd actually say the latter half of the track is where it starts to lose direction for me. I had hoped it was going to have a huge impact into something powerful and big but it's very gentle.
It works though. And I mean, it depends what your direction was and where you wanted to take it. It could be very purposeful.
That throaty bass line is fucking dope.
Here's what I've got going, I posted an earlier version a while ago but this is approaching full length now.
I like the breakdowns. The climaxes don't particularly grab me from an arrangement standpoint. I don't really feel like the they have a direction. Also, maybe to much mid bass/mid elements at the climaxes (specifically the piano)? I like a lot of the drums you have going on, the reverse piano thing, and the ambient background noise starting about :30 when the piano is playing. It is a really nice soundset, the bass at the climax is huge, but I think the song needs a different direction at the climaxes. Maybe even something more amelodic, since the breakdowns are melodic and you have a great bass to make something really simple and energetic at the climax.
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Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Looking for feedback before I finish this one:
Where is your vocal man, it would be really cool track if you have one!
Darek
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Originally posted by Seandroid
Here's what I've got going, I posted an earlier version a while ago but this is approaching full length now.
I will tell you which part of your track I really like and after that you can tell me how honest you wont me to be.
Intro sounds nice.
1:30~3:00 this is where you always shine man.
4:15 till the end - as above.
Cheers mate,
Darek
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Originally posted by evo8
im not a fan of that chirpy melody darek, sorry......
Now you are on my black list man, you going to be really, really sorry!!
Just kidding man, I knew I wasn't going to make every one happy lol but you can definitely help me a bit by telling me what exactly you don't like? -> either sound of that pluck or melody?
Cheers mate,
Darek
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Originally posted by Raphie
Here is a attempt to a deep groove
mixed live, the effort is in the little things, bouncing around in the back-end, you either find it utterly boring, or a 13min trip.
You can download to listen in HQ
curious whether the vibe gells or not.
Are you still exploring/searching you own style man? - it is not what I would normally listen but definitely appreciate quality of this creation - very cool blend of Industrial-Techno-Electro genres Raphie !!!
Cheers,
Darek
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Last edited by TranceLover007 on Nov-08-2013 at 02:10
Nov-07-2013 23:24
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
And for rest of you guys: scorpradio, Andy28, Raphie, Seandroid,
Juan Paulino and @Trancelover03591 - really appreciate your time and comment !!!!
Cheers,
Darek
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Last edited by TranceLover007 on Nov-08-2013 at 02:10
Nov-08-2013 00:01
Seandroid
Banned
Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Edmonton, Alberta
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
I will tell you which part of your track I really like and after that you can tell me how honest you wont me to be.
Intro sounds nice.
1:30~3:00 this is where you always shine man.
4:15 till the end - as above.
