Registered: Jun 2003
Location: City, Country format
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Originally posted by Evolve140
I really like this tune,no doubt you improved a lot since you've started posting here, i think there's a bit "dirt" in the mix at 4:40 but maybe it's just my speakers.
Oct-27-2013 09:56
evo8
Virtual Wannabe
Registered: Aug 2004
Location:
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Originally posted by Vancouver
New Track That is a bit harder than previous. hope someone likes it.
At this stage you got some serious problems with the bass in general, but with your ears moreover.
What the heck are you listening on? The low end is there and for the type of track it is very appropriate.
The bass shouldn't be boomy nor it should stick out, in many tracks it does almost work on a subconscious level I'd say.
So really, you should rethink your interpretation of edm.
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Oct-27-2013 14:52
TranceElevation
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2010
Location:
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Originally posted by Vancouver
New Track That is a bit harder than previous. hope someone likes it.
Excellent work. The only flaw I could spot was the lack of depth. I'd suggest a little bit more reverb to add some distance.
But overall good level.
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Oct-27-2013 15:01
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
quote:
Originally posted by TranceElevation
At this stage you got some serious problems with the bass in general, but with your ears moreover.
What the heck are you listening on? The low end is there and for the type of track it is very appropriate.
The bass shouldn't be boomy nor it should stick out, in many tracks it does almost work on a subconscious level I'd say.
So really, you should rethink your interpretation of edm.
He has the best monitors in all of TA. I assume the audio clip was changed.
thanks for the feedback. I make my tracks using $30 ear bud headphones so if the bass isn't spot on that would probably be why!
Oct-27-2013 17:56
TranceElevation
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2010
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by Vancouver
thanks for the feedback. I make my tracks using $30 ear bud headphones so if the bass isn't spot on that would probably be why!
Doesn't matter what you use. It is more important accustoming your ears to the equipment.
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Originally posted by Juan Paulino
He has the best monitors in all of TA. I assume the audio clip was changed.
Monitors are not a default insurance for success. If you are fundamentally stupid with low capacity of analysis and correct interpretation of circumstances even the most expensive arsenal won't save you. It might illude you, but it won't save you.
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Oct-27-2013 18:24
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
quote:
Originally posted by TranceElevation
Doesn't matter what you use. It is more important accustoming your ears to the equipment.
Monitors are not a default insurance for success. If you are fundamentally stupid with low capacity of analysis and correct interpretation of circumstances even the most expensive arsenal won't save you. It might illude you, but it won't save you.
Originally posted by Vancouver
New Track That is a bit harder than previous. hope someone likes it.
I'm not sure I can handle hearing that sample in another song haha. I wish the track wasn't so plinky-plonky in regards to the melody. And I feel like it should hit harder. It's too reverby and doesn't have that sort of powerful rhythmic impact. Of course I'm not really sure what your artistic direction was.
Originally posted by Seandroid
I'm not sure I can handle hearing that sample in another song haha. I wish the track wasn't so plinky-plonky in regards to the melody. And I feel like it should hit harder. It's too reverby and doesn't have that sort of powerful rhythmic impact. Of course I'm not really sure what your artistic direction was.
I promise I won't use that sample again haha. thx for the feedback.
Oct-27-2013 20:20
Richard Butler
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
quote:
Originally posted by Vancouver
New Track That is a bit harder than previous. hope someone likes it.
It's very polished, are most of the sounds your own?
My last 2 tracks people say they want a more aggressive bass, do you mean like this one which is a WIP I posted a while back, but with new beats and bass;