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Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
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Location: Rouge City
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Apr-03-2013 08:16
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evo8
Virtual Wannabe
Registered: Aug 2004
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Apr-04-2013 19:54
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evo8
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quote: | Originally posted by Vernon Wanderer
Well made, therefor not much to say, except that the kick gets uninspiring as the track progresses, it lacks both atmospheric and lead elements at that point too, but that's because you probably haven't gotten to that part yet when you uploaded. Good work man.
That's actually pretty damn good man. Finish it!
Here is my latest wip, very unfinished. The mixdown & limiting are probably terrible, will fix that when I get my KRK phones.
The main focus here was creating the drum loops. Working with sliced downtempo samples is awesome! Also, drum and chord variations will be added later.
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thanks man! - ive reworked it since then, kick was a bit low etc etc - i will upload the finished version to my soundcloud soon, i think ive spammed this thread enough for now
I like your track but it sounds a bit harsh to my ears - i think its the drum loop as it sounds sweet at the 3:30 mark! yep its defo that drumloop and distorted sound, dont like that personally
overall i know i could like this track pending some tweaks - nice to hear something like that for a change! good stuff
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Apr-04-2013 20:09
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Vernon Wanderer
Eye Q'ed
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quote: | Originally posted by evo8
I like your track but it sounds a bit harsh to my ears - i think its the drum loop as it sounds sweet at the 3:30 mark! yep its defo that drumloop and distorted sound, dont like that personally |
quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
I like the idea, but i don't like the drums, they are sort of repetitive and are not 100% on the grid which emphasizes the sample effect, maybe replay them yourself and add some variation in them? the rest of the track deserves it, genre wise it's easy listening to me. |
Thanks for feedback! About not being on the grid, is that a problem? I like the groove that creates, but you know, neutral ears are better than the creator's.
As I said, the drums are not finished yet, I have only made single bar loops for every one of them for now, but I will definitely add variations later.
And the sliced downtempo samples, yeah, I'll have to re-do them.
This is useful, love this thread.
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Vernon Wanderer will rediscover his roots back unto wandering vast endless plains miserably....
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