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Originally posted by MSZ I long for the day when im actually a great producer.

You got the juice now.

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Juan Paulino - Quantum Break (Original Mix) [Progressive Breaks]

okay this is done, thanks tyler for saying how repetitive the middle part was, the changes I made ended up being my favorite part of the track

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Originally posted by meriter okay this is done, thanks tyler for saying how repetitive the middle part was, the changes I made ended up being my favorite part of the track

I want to like this but just cant get into the groove of it, sorry!

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trying to keep it dark and heavy what do yous think? Too muddy? not grooving enough??

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Originally posted by evo8 I want to like this but just cant get into the groove of it, sorry!

you dont have to apologize, what I do isnt for everyone

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Originally posted by meriter okay this is done, thanks tyler for saying how repetitive the middle part was, the changes I made ended up being my favorite part of the track

Hey, no problem. It sounds a lot more professional! Good job! (It's better than anything I can do!)

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Originally posted by meriter okay this is done, thanks tyler for saying how repetitive the middle part was, the changes I made ended up being my favorite part of the track

Yup my favourite part to, the changes take nit a lot further.

MSZ - I'm only listening on pc speakers but it's translating very well. Seriously grown up and chunky dance music there.

In the meantime I've taken that delicious riff Bluff Monkey made for Massive and come up with this so far;

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Originally posted by Richard Butler MSZ - I'm only listening on pc speakers but it's translating very well. Seriously grown up and chunky dance music there. In the meantime I've taken that delicious riff Bluff Monkey made for Massive and come up with this so far;

I really like the vocals at about 1:30, but maybe cut back on the delay just a little. And maybe at 2:06 you could make the synth gradually come in, instead of it being instant. You know? AND the change at about 2:40 is slightly awkward.... Those are just little nit pickings I guess. I still love the vibe and everything, especially the vocals. (Another track better than anything I will ever make!)

Tell me, what's wrong with it?

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Originally posted by Tyler James Tell me, what's wrong with it?

Liking the piano melody and sound, and the echo is good.
Nothing wrong with the rest (apart from that Dracula sample!!).
If you wanted to improve the track I'd say make more original esoteric drums to tie in with the whole ambient feel, otherwise it's a bit like you stuck a loop over it and vary the drums quite a lot so they don't become static.
I know nothing about ambient so I am not the best to feedback here.

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Originally posted by evo8 trying to keep it dark and heavy what do yous think? Too muddy? not grooving enough??

Great sounds and sound quality again, just the type of dark techno I like. Very good tension underpinned by a classy groove. Like the kick as it has an organic feel to it. I don't know if you add room verb to your sounds but if you do it works well and gives a nice personality stamp.