hopefully not spamming too much - heres a cheeky 2 tracker, first one may need some tinkering as the timing/groove seems to be off
2nd one is a track i started this evening and is as far as ive got with it
Originally posted by evo8
hopefully not spamming too much - heres a cheeky 2 tracker, first one may need some tinkering as the timing/groove seems to be off
2nd one is a track i started this evening and is as far as ive got with it
I think that sounds really good and deep (at least for my taste) + that noise sound (which you use with some reverb on it) is really cool and fill the overall space really nicely -> I guess you are closing really quickly on adding some finishing touches before releasing it - me like it
Darek
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Last edited by TranceLover007 on Sep-26-2013 at 18:14
Sep-25-2013 19:20
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
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Originally posted by evo8
Darek the production is very nice (i think you posted this wip before at some stage it sounds familiar?)
Thanks man and yes this is a song which was previously on here in the slightly different form as it is right now - I'm actually trying to go more Trancy direction at this point.
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Originally posted by evo8
I would lose that reverbed tom sound in the breakdown, doesnt really fit imo
Agree with that idea - not a particular fun of it myself (will replace it with something more suiting this atmo) - appreciate!!!
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Originally posted by evo8
Not sure on the way the song changes after the break? Does it need to change like that? I was kinda hoping it would drop in as it was before the break
It is a few bars only (with a breaks incl.) - a slight change in vibe/groove for attractiveness purposes only - I'm still finding myself in an active Trance mode mentally lol
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Originally posted by evo8
Also i would be inclined to boost the very very top end to give a little bit of sheen
Yep, I will slightly shift the balance to the top of the sounds spectrum - I also notice this myself before - cool ear man.
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Originally posted by evo8
I like it though, its very difficult to get this type of track right without being too cheesy
And you think it still sounds "cheesy" to you - Thanks for all your time and comments man
Cheers,
Darek
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Originally posted by MSZ
Nice music Dar, can you put this on youtube so I can listen to it more often after you're finished? I dont like soundcloud > <
Will PM you when is finished as this was done (in mind) to play on C89.5 station - Thanks Maciej.
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Originally posted by MSZ
I dont really have any criticism though. Reminds me a lot of Tom Cloud - Million miles away, and like that track so gj.
I think previously you mention something about vocal levels across this song? - and you were right about that - I'm still monkey-ing with this issue at the moment -> vocal recording wasn't really good (and clean) in quality so on the end I had to spend some extra time on polishing and masking all of those imperfections with some serious amount of vocal DeEsser on top of it - good ear man !!!
Cheer Brother,
Darek
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Last edited by TranceLover007 on Sep-25-2013 at 20:46
Sep-25-2013 20:00
evo8
Virtual Wannabe
Registered: Aug 2004
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quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Thanks man and yes this is a song which was previously on here in the slightly different form as it is right now - I'm actually trying to go more Trancy direction at this point.
Agree with that idea - not a particular fun of it myself (will replace it with something more suiting this atmo) - appreciate!!!
It is a few bars only (with a breaks incl.) - a slight change in vibe/groove for attractiveness purposes only - I'm still finding myself in an active Trance mode mentally lol
Yep, I will slightly shift the balance to the top of the sounds spectrum - I also notice this myself before - cool ear man.
And you think it still sounds "cheesy" to you - Thanks for all your time and comments man
Cheers,
Darek
No - thats my point in that i dont think its that cheesy really... well as much as is allowed in that style anyway
Darek her vocals mind me La Roux, really the basis of quite something special in places.
I wouldn't mind remixing it. I enjoyed your version and I would look to conjure up a 'hard' version.
My computer is fucked and am awaiting it to be fixed.
Your break - personally I think it should be more unusual, like fading to a single unusual weird sound before banging back in but you know it's just a taste comment is all.
Very good melodic synths mate.
Sep-26-2013 15:43
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here we go guys, my WIP (actually very close to be done) is on the table now.
Need some massaging and polishing in transitions parts but structurally should be well defined -> I would like to here your opinions a specially from people who likes this particular type of EDM and from some who doesn't lol - Appreciate.
DCH New Concept September 15 2013 Mix NEW COMBO IDEA by DariusX.
Originally posted by evo8
hopefully not spamming too much - heres a cheeky 2 tracker, first one may need some tinkering as the timing/groove seems to be off
2nd one is a track i started this evening and is as far as ive got with it
I want to hear moar groove, maybe add some perc?
Nice nevertheless.
Ya Dar, just nitpicking someone can ALWAYS pick something, but I feel there is too much treble at some points. For some reason, I would use this track as reference, hell it did sell all those copies
Sep-26-2013 18:42
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
Ya Dar, just nitpicking someone can ALWAYS pick something, but I feel there is too much treble at some points. For some reason, I would use this track as reference, hell it did sell all those copies
Like how this vocal blends with the rest of the sound/s - very smooth and easy on your ear lol - we will see if I could get my song to the same level - it would be my ultimate test as a producer lol - if not, I will quit !!!!
Darek
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Location: City, Country format
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
DCH New Concept September 15 2013 Mix NEW COMBO IDEA by DariusX.
I like it, i'm one of those pricks who listen to the dub version of every release so not so sure how much i like female vocals throughout the entire thing but the track itself is real nice imo.
Kinda reminds me of that 2004ish ISOS music that i liked so much, good not too overbearing music.
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Originally posted by evo8
hopefully not spamming too much - heres a cheeky 2 tracker, first one may need some tinkering as the timing/groove seems to be off
2nd one is a track i started this evening and is as far as ive got with it
I like the 2nd track, though that hat is a bit annoying (maybe its just too loud.
