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Originally posted by gordan100 Is this any good?

For me there's an interesting overall pallet around 3.09-3.11 where I get a glimpse of how this could sound a nice deep house type track

Not sure if you know what I'm getting at

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Originally posted by Richard Butler For me there's an interesting overall pallet around 3.09-3.11 where I get a glimpse of how this could sound a nice deep house type track Not sure if you know what I'm getting at

Something like this?

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Originally posted by gordan100 Something like this?

I had in mind the rhythmic feel that is present in the little snippet I mentioned, but anyhow you do whatever floats your boat.

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How about this version? I've ditched the bass, changed the kick and added some simple hihats

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It isn't that this is bad, I believe it just needs a different "swing". Personally, I wouldn't have removed the bass but rather changed it up a bit by adding some kind of break beat. Take that and a revolving bass line and I believe this would be a beautiful chill piece

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Originally posted by gordan100 How about this version? I've ditched the bass, changed the kick and added some simple hihats

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FYI: Not trance but this and KVR are pretty much the only music forums I visit these days.

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Originally posted by Mel David FYI: Not trance but this and KVR are pretty much the only music forums I visit these days.

This sounds really cool man, the only thing that maybe bothers me is a bit unexpected decrease of volume of that stabby thing (at 20 sec and 36 sec).

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Originally posted by Mel David FYI: Not trance but this and KVR are pretty much the only music forums I visit these days.

A glorious avangarde (sp) sound

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https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/falling

I'm trying to get good at deep house. Any good?

Need to add fx etc

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Originally posted by gordan100 This sounds really cool man, the only thing that maybe bothers me is a bit unexpected decrease of volume of that stabby thing (at 20 sec and 36 sec).

I just upgraded my Izotope Elements to Standard Edition so (hopefully) I can make better masters now but the volume differences there are just lazy MIDI programming on my part. I actually couldn't hear the differences on my >20 year old Sony Walkman earbuds I was using, but when I listen on my iMac's internal speakers it is quite apparent. Also need to find better snare samples but I will keep that thing going where the snare changes every 2 bars. It grooves better like that. I've experimented with using the same snare throughout versus alternating snares.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/falling I'm trying to get good at deep house. Any good? Need to add fx etc

I like this, nice melodies, it's more progressive house than deep house imo, anyway, who cares about genre

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It's a bit low in volume so you need to crank it up a bit. I had some ear piercing from listening this, not sure if it's still a problem.

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