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Originally posted by gordan100 I was humming some melody with this wip and, as i could not really find some nice sound preset for the melody, i've decided to record that humming on a phone app :S and tried to pimp it to sound decent... starts at 02:05. Is it bad?

Honestly this is pretty good mate, really captivating and I like the arps, your vox and that sustained bass.

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 I had no idea what happened on the first attempt. It was ducking and I couldn't figure out where or how. So...tossed it and did it again. Havne't heard in the truck yet but hoping! Sub feedback would be appreciated

Dunno man there's some dissonant parts in here, and it doesn't sound as cool and pro as other work of yours lately. Sorry man it's just too cheese.

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Guys so here are my 5 submissions for my EP - honestly I truly am pretty circumspect of this shit, none of them sound great to me, but hey ho, let me know if you like any of these;

Bit of a big ask for me to expect you to wade through these I realise, sorry boys.

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Last edited by Richard Butler on Sep-23-2018 at 16:29

We is my favourite of those ^^

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@Richard: I like "I'm Back", "We" and "Drifting back". On "Dnb never" snare seems to be a bit out of mix

"Cannot hear" kick is not going well with the rest of the mix (which also sounds a bit lifeless)

@Phil: yeah, you had much better works than this, sorry

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Originally posted by Mel David Yeah the kick and sub bass are competing for mix space. You can try pitching the kick away from the bass line or find another kick sample, if you're not doing the side-chain compressor thing. With these more downtempo grooves I like a more solid kick instead of a rounded 909. Check out the kick to Magic Marmalade - Again 'N' Again. It kicks you in the gut like Bruce Lee.

That is a nice kick . Bass was sidechained at first, but i turned it off, it seemed fine to me without sidechaining, i'll check it out.

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 I am instantly taken back to the movie "Risky Business" which had some cuts from one of my all time fave electronic group Tangerine Dream. That Arp is very reminiscent of a few scenes. Very Atmospheric but imho that kick is out of place. Perhaps something with the front end cut off, a little flatter. That sub bass is dope! (Ritchard's been rubbing off on you hasn't he..lol And that is quite alright. He's damn good with that sub!) Really grooving mix...and you are starting to use a lot of middle atmospheric overtones in your songs now. I also notice your timing and composition is getting better when you are introducing new and different percussive elements. It shows and you get that intensity and build,but slowly. All in all a solid track. Needs some EQ polishing but that is easy. Cool Track!

Thanks Phil.. Yeah, Rich does nice subs, Paul and msz too . I got two kicks there, in which part is out of place, or it is alltogether out of place?

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Originally posted by gordan100 I was humming some melody with this wip and, as i could not really find some nice sound preset for the melody, i've decided to record that humming on a phone app :S and tried to pimp it to sound decent... starts at 02:05. Is it bad?

Very Nice, big round bass and the hums sound very unique, nice job.

Now I just need that chord change.

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Originally posted by Mel David Not really a WIP. Well the video is. Trying to get some interesting bokeh balls out of disco lights. My lens has a fly-by-wire focusing system so it's hard to manually target focus points reliably.

the timing on some of the tracks is off which makes it hard for me to listen to, nice idea though

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Originally posted by gordan100 I was humming some melody with this wip and, as i could not really find some nice sound preset for the melody, i've decided to record that humming on a phone app :S and tried to pimp it to sound decent... starts at 02:05. Is it bad?

reminds me of this!

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Guys so here are my 5 submissions for my EP - honestly I truly am pretty circumspect of this shit, none of them sound great to me, but hey ho, let me know if you like any of these; Bit of a big ask for me to expect you to wade through these I realise, sorry boys.

Cannot Hear
We
DnB Never (absolute fave from you)




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number 2/6 from the vault I am attempting to resurrect

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Last edited by SystematicX1 on Oct-02-2018 at 16:52