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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?

whats freq shifting? dont think I have anything that does that except maybe the vocoder. its probably pretty wide, I dont mono stuff.

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Originally posted by MSZ I dont mono stuff.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit. Darek Here is my another chillout WIP

I enjoyed the synths and sounds all but feel the drums aren't Human enough, and they sound a bit lumpy and basic. You get some great synth pluks.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)

For me your nicest sound yet, a lovely piece, finish it

What reverb are you using I love how it sounds

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Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys

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Originally posted by Richard Butler For me your nicest sound yet, a lovely piece, finish it What reverb are you using I love how it sounds

Thanks, will try. I'm using fl reverb 2, comes with fl studio.

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It seems to quiet. Kick is to powerful? I like the idea, it gets a bit samey after while for me, maybe needs some cutting or more work on the arrangement.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys

This may be great track man but your dynamics and sound level is not letting this production shine the most - don't know if this will help Richard.

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Anyone like the destroyed vocal sample after 2:08?

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Originally posted by gordan100 Anyone like the destroyed vocal sample after 2:08?

Couple of things to consider Gordan, one is this buzzing noise almost from the beginning which is unnecessary (in my opinion), second is your vocal and I agree should be change to something more suitable for this type of vibe - my $0.02

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Couple of things to consider Gordan, one is this buzzing noise almost from the beginning which is unnecessary (in my opinion), second is your vocal and I agree should be change to something more suitable for this type of vibe - my $0.02 Darek

Thanks for listening Darek, yeah maybe i should get rid of that buzz on bass. I still kinda like the vocal, i'll check it again in the morning.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Thanks for listening Darek, yeah maybe i should get rid of that buzz on bass. I still kinda like the vocal, i'll check it again in the morning.

But overall quality of your WIP is much more stable and dynamic - it is getting better and better

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