an attempt at ambient/space, needs a lot of tweaks here and there and maybe some sounds changed altogether but its late

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Originally posted by gordan100 Here is a download of arp only track if anyone wants to mess with it (128bpm)

Haven't had much time but here is a bounce of a House approach (unmixed)

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Originally posted by evo8 an attempt at ambient/space, needs a lot of tweaks here and there and maybe some sounds changed altogether but its late

Sound intense, ghostly and haunted, scary shit

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Haven't had much time but here is a bounce of a House approach (unmixed)

I like that "haaaaa" sound at the start (or is it a subtle crash). Not sure about snare, sound nice but breaks the flow for me

Needs also more variations on arp, or different arrangement to keep the interest. Me very proud that you are using it, thanks

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Mixed that again, some reverb added (probably too much) and replaced the drums.

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Originally posted by evo8 an attempt at ambient/space, needs a lot of tweaks here and there and maybe some sounds changed altogether but its late

Excellent sound design, mixing, etc as usual. A little monotonous, but great showcase of your sound engineering skills.

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Originally posted by gordan100

I like a lot of the elements in this, but it doesn't really develop that much over the course of the track. Decent sound design and mixing, nice elements, but just not enough there yet to fully fill out a track.

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Haven't had much time but here is a bounce of a House approach (unmixed)

I like a lot of elements in this, but I don't think it is developed very much. What about adding some chord progressions to mix it up? The synths are pretty good and with some mixing I am sure the sound design will be pretty good. Just needs more structure and development.

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 I like a lot of elements in this, but I don't think it is developed very much. What about adding some chord progressions to mix it up? The synths are pretty good and with some mixing I am sure the sound design will be pretty good. Just needs more structure and development.

Agreed, and you are 100% , this is totally undeveloped and somewhat purposely. If anything I think I looked more at it like a demo to Gordan100.
Essentially, besides Gordan's Arp, the rest is purely percussive.
With some other cuts and added arrangement/comp as mentioned, this could develop nicely.
The point I was attempting to achieve was the control you have by using one shot (good quality) samples vs a fully composed rhythm loop(that is not good quality to begin)

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Haven't had much time but here is a bounce of a House approach (unmixed)

yes, i really like this, thought the kick was a bit clicky but its probably ok
just need to build towards some crescendo in a breakdown!

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Agreed, and you are 100% , this is totally undeveloped and somewhat purposely. If anything I think I looked more at it like a demo to Gordan100. Essentially, besides Gordan's Arp, the rest is purely percussive. With some other cuts and added arrangement/comp as mentioned, this could develop nicely. The point I was attempting to achieve was the control you have by using one shot (good quality) samples vs a fully composed rhythm loop(that is not good quality to begin)

@trancelover also ... dont fall into the trap of adding more elements to develop, sure you dont want the track to sound boring, sometimes the line is fine
the more stuff you add, the more fatiguing it can become as there are too many elements for the brain to try and concentrate on, my 2c

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