Originally posted by SystematicX1
You guys take your WIPS down to quick..lol
Welp, this is just an idea or a very early WIP
*edit- should have probably given a better edit here as after the 3:00 mark it repeats. Sorry
Dont know if this something artistic you're going for, but on my system the whole beat sounds drowned out mega, some of the nice synthwork really pops so nice job on that part.
Aug-16-2017 19:39
SystematicX1
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Location: Washington Coast
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Originally posted by MSZ
Dont know if this something artistic you're going for, but on my system the whole beat sounds drowned out mega, some of the nice synthwork really pops so nice job on that part.
Heya MSZ, long time no see man. Thanks for the reply.
Yea, early early stages (like just 5 hours ago) but what I believe you are referring to is the automation on the kick from the 45-240 hz.
Not sure if it really correlates to the track yet and not sure it will even remain.
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Aug-16-2017 20:00
evo8
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Originally posted by SystematicX1
You guys take your WIPS down to quick..lol
Welp, this is just an idea or a very early WIP
*edit- should have probably given a better edit here as after the 3:00 mark it repeats. Sorry
ok, i really like the sounds here and the mood, that sawish lead that pops up every now and again is fat
just the kick has no real low end to speak of and theres no real bassline - as such its actually a nice melodic piece of music
you could keep it beatless and have that version - then make some changes/sacrifices for a trance/techno version, my 2c
Originally posted by SystematicX1
You guys take your WIPS down to quick..lol
Welp, this is just an idea or a very early WIP
*edit- should have probably given a better edit here as after the 3:00 mark it repeats. Sorry
Sounds like you started really cool project man (right from 1:00 min mark to about 3:15) - nice and path synth with lots of depth in it and on top of that you have pretty sweet melodic concept going on which creates darn good atmosphere - awesome
Btw, please check your drums/kick as this sounds like you have auto-filter on it in the middle part of this track.
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Sounds like you started really cool project man (right from 1:00 min mark to about 3:15) - nice and path synth with lots of depth in it and on top of that you have pretty sweet melodic concept going on which creates darn good atmosphere - awesome
Btw, please check your drums/kick as this sounds like you have auto-filter on it in the middle part of this track.
Darek
Always glad for your feedback Darek, Thanks man.
Yea, guess I am going to have to change that EQ frequency to a flat tone. Might just change the kick altogether.
Appreciate guys!
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Aug-16-2017 21:55
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I'd like to confirm my suspicions.
-the bass is dissonant(especially the first note) when I listen on my speakers, but not so much through headphones, does it irk you? I tried to pitch it around it doesnt seem to be helping which would require resynthesis and restructure whichim not really down for.
I need to cut the bass at some point, also lazy.
watch out, overall this piece is too loud, its killing the dynamics, I dont wanna fuck with that either right now, its going to take a lot of balancing out. I had it more mellow before but now I fear there is too much distortion emanating to kill the form.
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Aug-17-2017 00:11
TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
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Originally posted by MSZ
I'd like to confirm my suspicions.
-the bass is dissonant(especially the first note) when I listen on my speakers, but not so much through headphones, does it irk you? I tried to pitch it around it doesnt seem to be helping which would require resynthesis and restructure whichim not really down for.
I need to cut the bass at some point, also lazy.
watch out, overall this piece is too loud, its killing the dynamics, I dont wanna fuck with that either right now, its going to take a lot of balancing out. I had it more mellow before but now I fear there is too much distortion emanating to kill the form.
I really like where you going with this but you are completely right about your first note Mac, sound wired at the best man, you can take some of the de-tune of your base but I don't think this would do the job lol
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Here is more develop part of my Chill/ambient track which I posted before, any thoughts?
Thanks guys,
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Fantastic work, you're even giving a basshead like me too much bass which is great. If I were to criticize it a bit, everything is very static it comes in and out without any movement or intrigue, I would maybe incorporate some human touch into every bit. Also I think I fixed my bum note, yay.
Aug-17-2017 04:20
SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Washington Coast
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Originally posted by evo8
ok, i really like the sounds here and the mood, that sawish lead that pops up every now and again is fat
just the kick has no real low end to speak of and theres no real bassline - as such its actually a nice melodic piece of music
you could keep it beatless and have that version - then make some changes/sacrifices for a trance/techno version, my 2c
Thanks bud, yea...that saw is the driving force for me to work more on this. Ive envisioned a few different directions that I could take it
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Aug-17-2017 05:01
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here is more develop part of my Chill/ambient track which I posted before, any thoughts?
Thanks guys,
Darek
really like this one Darek, nice mood at the start and a nice groove, the background arp that comes in is a nice driver
the mix is straining at certain points, could be the bass that is causing that, should be easy enough to fix
I'd like to confirm my suspicions.
-the bass is dissonant(especially the first note) when I listen on my speakers, but not so much through headphones, does it irk you? I tried to pitch it around it doesnt seem to be helping which would require resynthesis and restructure whichim not really down for.
I need to cut the bass at some point, also lazy.
watch out, overall this piece is too loud, its killing the dynamics, I dont wanna fuck with that either right now, its going to take a lot of balancing out. I had it more mellow before but now I fear there is too much distortion emanating to kill the form.
like where it goes at the end with the extra melody coming in
