There has been some,"flexibility" on this thread in recent past due to only a handful of people really posting anything,consistently.
Sometimes, people do not even post a track and respond to another persons wip because we truly care about one anothers work.
With that said, one who does not post a lot of tracks and only post's tracks to get feedback on their own work..well, you get what you pay for.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Here's a bit of a different take on the same track. The beat is a bit clunky atm, but it'll get sorted.

Sounds pretty nice, but the bassline compression is hurting my eardrums a tiny bit w/ headphones, kind of fatiguing to listen to.

back with my previous wip, discarded some sounds, added new etc, but it's still muddy, lacking the mental alacrity right now to mix any better.



*edit nvm, there is too much dissonance to show.

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I will feedback others shortly

Is this hard sounding

Me on vocs but this is for a rapper to talk all over

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Track didnt post Richard, at least I am not seeing it

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I can see it ok here ..

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I will feedback others shortly Is this hard sounding Me on vocs but this is for a rapper to talk all over

Ok..I am seeing it now maybe I just needed a refresh.
So, this track....uh...DAMN son!
That bass is PHAT and the progression has a bassnectar feel to it.
A little more portamento perhaps on the tail?

On the second verse are you pitching that rolling kick? Sounds very cool

The only thing I am still trying to figure out is the intro piece.
Its very atmospheric and I dig it. It's still fresh on my ears but I am unsure if the two pieces fit together. I like the melodies on it's own but that bass progression is what stands out to me the most.
Not really sure if you are in need of a Rapper with this. Maybe just some vox glitches?

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Great 'advices' thanks Systematic. I like the idea of gliched vocal snippets as I can do these myself - I do find working with vocalists so long and hassley

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I will feedback others shortly Is this hard sounding Me on vocs but this is for a rapper to talk all over

Love the parts with the bass, sounds really good and moody - the little breaks im not sure about the music in those, i know its probably meant to sound a little weird for contrast but not sure if you couldnt do something better there

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I will feedback others shortly Is this hard sounding Me on vocs but this is for a rapper to talk all over

I'm laying my head on the bass. Great, Richard. I like breaks too, but would love bass parts longer. Would buy!

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Last edited by gordan100 on Jun-02-2017 at 19:33

Some loud thing i did

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