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Originally posted by Richard Butler That is peng when the ride comes in. Just add a bit more evolution, the odd big stab etc and it's good to go. Very hypnotic.

I need to lose them cheesy bongos, thanks mate, i also need to finish some of these ffs

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Meh

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Ok I totally changed it lol

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Originally posted by gordan100 Meh

i like the whole mix but just the arrangement is very messy, you could make something from this but id rework it

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Originally posted by evo8 i like the whole mix but just the arrangement is very messy, you could make something from this but id rework it

Thanks, i will try one more time. Meanwhile to wash my ears from this one i did one more. It's very simple though. Retro

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I did some arrangment changes, not much. It's more logical now, i think. Any suggestions? Is beginning ok?

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One more. I'm a spam bot actually.

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Last edited by gordan100 on Apr-11-2017 at 01:22

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Originally posted by gordan100 One more. I'm a spam bot actually.

this one has the most potential i think, personally i dont think those stabs work

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Originally posted by evo8 this one has the most potential i think, personally i dont think those stabs work

it's also my favorite out of three.. I have misplaced some stabs notes and overdo them... I'll play with this one some more. Thanks for comment Evo!

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Hi guys, long time no see

Feeling old school proggy.... Does the concept of the song work? Anything sticking out like a sore thumb? I need to clean up the reverb on the drums a bit I think.

Last edited by djnitride on Apr-15-2017 at 04:53

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Ok I totally changed it lol

Sounding good overall, concept and execution. Mixing wise, not sure if its because my MDR7506 are accentuating the highs on those hats too much, but they sound almost "prickly" to my ears, to the point it might bother me to listen to a longer version of the song.

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