Worked more on this, does not mean it's better now

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110BPM?? WTF??? Who wants to take a trip to the 90s?

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Originally posted by evo8 i dont even know what this is, tech-house? just an idea right now...

Nice, just bring in a bass at some point, and I would suggest not having that main lead synth all the time

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Last edited by mnw479 on May-15-2016 at 19:09

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Originally posted by mnw479 welcome for all constructive criticism :-) https://soundcloud.com/mndoubleu/al...mix-4-processed

Really not my style of music, but perhaps someone into dubstep can answer you better. I think it needs some work, honestly.



happy with the first part, thinking if i should cut it midway..

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Originally posted by mnw479 welcome for all constructive criticism :-) https://soundcloud.com/mndoubleu/al...mix-4-processed

I like your synth timing and lines - as long as you made them and did not just get them from packs, lol

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred Really not my style of music, but perhaps someone into dubstep can answer you better. I think it needs some work, honestly. happy with the first part, thinking if i should cut it midway..

it could be nice if you dropped out the synth at some stage, have a mini-break then slam back in with some hats/rides, just for some contrast?

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Originally posted by evo8 it could be nice if you dropped out the synth at some stage, have a mini-break then slam back in with some hats/rides, just for some contrast?

Hmm...well I took it out midway, then brought it back in soon after. Does it sound repetitive? It comes in right during/after the break.

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hope is 'street' lol

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred Hmm...well I took it out midway, then brought it back in soon after. Does it sound repetitive? It comes in right during/after the break.

just re-listening there, can still hear some sort of synth all the way through? but its up to you thats more of an arrangment/style consideration

one thing i did notice is that the sound is practically mono to my ears, so you could use a bit of chorus here and there or whatever just to make the track sound a little wider/bigger

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Originally posted by evo8 just re-listening there, can still hear some sort of synth all the way through? but its up to you thats more of an arrangment/style consideration one thing i did notice is that the sound is practically mono to my ears, so you could use a bit of chorus here and there or whatever just to make the track sound a little wider/bigger

Think I take it out for a bit, then bring it back during the break (not the 303, but the synth).

Good advice on making the track wider, unfortunately I still wasn't able to use my multitrack unit, so I record everything to two stereo tracks, as usual.

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred Think I take it out for a bit, then bring it back during the break (not the 303, but the synth). Good advice on making the track wider, unfortunately I still wasn't able to use my multitrack unit, so I record everything to two stereo tracks, as usual.

your better starting with most things monos anyway, easier to mix

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