Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here we go guys just a demo for now but_still thinking about adding some smooth and catchy female vocal to it but you can hear the concept already
Darek
Your best track in a while I think but you can make the piano melody more enriching by adding another note or 2, I will post up what I mean shortly;
I was thinking a piano melody along these lines but of course it's your baby,
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Anyway I went away and re-worked the drop for colours 3, this is about as good as I can do really
i like that only critic is the transition as you have all ur elements in the breakdown to the single note build its to servere make its change more subtle imo
btw any idears what else mine might need? some may not like the arrangement being as long but hald of it wont be played due to mix in/out
Nov-22-2015 22:46
evo8
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
Anyway I went away and re-worked the drop for colours 3, this is about as good as I can do really
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Your best track in a while I think but you can make the piano melody more enriching by adding another note or 2, I will post up what I mean shortly;
I was thinking a piano melody along these lines but of course it's your baby,
Cheers Richard,
Got your idea on how to spice-up this piano a bit man, will try different approaches and see what would work the best - appreciate!!!
Darek
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
Your best track in a while I think but you can make the piano melody more enriching by adding another note or 2, I will post up what I mean shortly;
I was thinking a piano melody along these lines but of course it's your baby,
the demo song by darek, i like it has some interesting buildups....one thing i would address is the white noise sweeps they sound out of place and harsh
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this one i like it also it's got a good groove, that splash riser thing at the 2 minute mark sounds kind of weird and out of place.
thanks dude listened to a ton of shadowchild mixes and radioshows when I lived in LA during part of my production hiatus, probably one of my biggest influences. I sometimes envy younger producers who pick up the art and start banging out awesome tracks 2-3 years later, since I've been mucking around for more than 10. but the way things turned out it had to go the way it did, and i wouldn't change a thing even if i could. tbh its kind of a big deal to me to be able to make stuff like this. im sure some of you can relate, when you're good but you're *just* not quite there, either production wise or artistically. I bogged myself down by either focusing on certain aspects of making tracks and over-doing it or not focusing enough on certain parts that I left to be improved upon, but I think as long as you understand that there is ALWAYS room for improvement and development and you stay humble, it is possible to reach certain goals/dreams, that insatiable obsession-like passion bordering on clinically insane
btw will check mix after I wake up. im a zombie at the moment
Nov-29-2015 23:24
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
Been getting annoyed with my mixing ,lately, is this better?
Nice and smooth vibe Richard - particular like when this pluck is coming with this soft melody,catchy stuff man and was wonder where you gonna take this WIP (which direction) - LIKE IT !!!
Darek
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listened to a ton of shadowchild mixes and radioshows when I lived in LA during part of my production hiatus, probably one of my biggest influences. I sometimes envy younger producers who pick up the art and start banging out awesome tracks 2-3 years later, since I've been mucking around for more than 10. but the way things turned out it had to go the way it did, and i wouldn't change a thing even if i could. tbh its kind of a big deal to me to be able to make stuff like this. im sure some of you can relate, when you're good but you're *just* not quite there, either production wise or artistically. I bogged myself down by either focusing on certain aspects of making tracks and over-doing it or not focusing enough on certain parts that I left to be improved upon, but I think as long as you understand that there is ALWAYS room for improvement and development and you stay humble, it is possible to reach certain goals/dreams, that insatiable obsession-like passion bordering on clinically insane
