Originally posted by evo8
a housey one that i started yesterday evening, cant remember the last time i did a track like this
I prefer this over your most recent wip here. This one would be nice to drive to - I think though the kick is lost and needs to assert it's presence more such that it is the question to the baseline answer.
Like those little arp lines.
Jun-18-2013 11:29
evo8
Virtual Wannabe
Registered: Aug 2004
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by sako487
Chill house track I started yesterday, mix is very rough
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I prefer this over your most recent wip here. This one would be nice to drive to - I think though the kick is lost and needs to assert it's presence more such that it is the question to the baseline answer.
Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Sorry guys this jus came out of nowhere and reminds me of driving at night.
Mix only done on little pc speakers so far so it's probably iffy.
I'm glad your still making some progressive trance/house tracks. I like this one. I like the breakdown starting at 1:49, I like the sound design, the melody/harmony and how it progresses. I think the climax after the breakdown could be a little more exciting. I like the kick on the track.
quote:
Originally posted by sako487
Chill house track I started yesterday, mix is very rough
Let me know what you guys think
Sounds like it is going to be a cool track. Although, it is kind of like the mid frequencies are missing or there are too much hi's or something (at least on my headphones).
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Originally posted by evo8
a housey one that i started yesterday evening, cant remember the last time i did a track like this
This is great. Nice percussion and very good atmosphere. Chill in the sun with a beer track. Had any progress with this one?
I wouldn't mind if that atmospheric pad would be used to transition over to a break at some point. I want more.
Jun-19-2013 11:22
NoName_At_All
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2013
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by Trancelover03591
I doubt very many people on TA like the genre of this track but if anyone has any feedback on how I can improve I appreciate it:
The mixing is great. There are some elements I have a hard time with. I don't like the melody playing over the kick after the drop. Mainly because it takes to much focus away from the kick. Nothing wrong with the sound itself, it's just the melody that annoys me.
Other than that, I think you are getting good at creating buildups and anticipation.
Jun-19-2013 11:50
NoName_At_All
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2013
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Sorry guys this jus came out of nowhere and reminds me of driving at night.
Mix only done on little pc speakers so far so it's probably iffy.
Sounds good. I actually like the break.
Jun-19-2013 12:10
evo8
Virtual Wannabe
Registered: Aug 2004
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by NoName_At_All
This is great. Nice percussion and very good atmosphere. Chill in the sun with a beer track. Had any progress with this one?
I wouldn't mind if that atmospheric pad would be used to transition over to a break at some point. I want more.
thanks
its pretty much done, not changing anything in the arrangement as i really like the feel of the track the way it is right now
i need to maybe adjust the kick slightly and maybe a tiny bit of eq on the arp
Transfered everything from Logic 9 to Garageband with no hassle. Switched to a different kick thanks tot he audio engine and some new pads and a new lead. Now i'm ready for breakdown.
Mix sounds good so far, the lead at 2:30 could be a touch louder for my taste.
My track I'm struggling a bit with at the moment. Let me know what you think about the mix and everything else.
Jun-19-2013 22:20
DJ RANN
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: May 2001
Location: Hollywood....
quote:
Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Transfered everything from Logic 9 to Garageband with no hassle. Switched to a different kick thanks tot he audio engine and some new pads and a new lead. Now i'm ready for breakdown.
Behold, the power of Garageband!
I was going to critique the track Juan, but I can always tell the digital distortion that the Garage band engine introduces though; Sorry but I can't help but think noob when I hear it
Jun-19-2013 22:25
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
quote:
Originally posted by DJ RANN
I was going to critique the track Juan, but I can always tell the digital distortion that the Garage band engine introduces though; Sorry but I can't help but think noob when I hear it
To each their own. Cubase has the most distorted playback engine ever, will try pro tools and see how that goes.
The Garageband engine made me change my kick and i think it sounds better now.
