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Originally posted by gordan100 This has probably too much bass and overall sounds kinda muddy, arrangement is bad as usual , but what do you think about melody stucture, is it boring and predictable?

maybe needs a bit of a change somewhere melody wise, not sure what or where tho!
nice round sound to the kick and bass!

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Originally posted by gordan100 This has probably too much bass and overall sounds kinda muddy, arrangement is bad as usual , but what do you think about melody stucture, is it boring and predictable?

It shouldn't sound right but it does, bass wise.

I'd drop that predictable guitar for one. come in earlier t[with that sound that you have in at 53 secs, but less resonance and quieter. Then shortly after add a big shimmering unusual pluk or something.

IMO

Evo thanks, I've altered it and almost finished now. The last rise is too short I think

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Evo and Richard, thanks for your comments

some ambient/drone

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Evo, I am trying to isolate one of the tones here. I want to say its the toneblower type of sound but, is there like a record playing sample on that? It sounds a little crackly (in a good way) yet it fades when the blower tone fades as well.
Very cool and dark

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Some angry musak

Richard...this sounds bad ass man.
Question though, is it me or is this panned hard left

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 is it me or is this panned hard left

Maybe it is creative license?

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Evo, I am trying to isolate one of the tones here. I want to say its the toneblower type of sound but, is there like a record playing sample on that? It sounds a little crackly (in a good way) yet it fades when the blower tone fades as well. Very cool and dark

thanks for listening! as regards the sound you are hearing, whereabouts in the track? is it the first sound?

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Richard...this sounds bad ass man. Question though, is it me or is this panned hard left

To me sounds like panned 50% right.

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Originally posted by evo8 thanks for listening! as regards the sound you are hearing, whereabouts in the track? is it the first sound?

yea, it appears about the first 10 seconds of the track then fades

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 yea, it appears about the first 10 seconds of the track then fades

thats just a preset from the new TAL Sampler, sounds class! only bought it so havent dived deep into yet

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Sorry guys, it's Friday so you know what that means, feedback time.

Getting close to finished, any thoughts on this as I am deffo sending this one out?

EDIT> Ive improved it since posting this up earlier.

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Last edited by Richard Butler on Jul-17-2015 at 19:55