Cam someone give me their ears on this, the football club track I'm doing.
I seem to have too much bass, do you agree?

I should re-do the crowd chant, it sounds nasty.

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Originally posted by gordan100 I think i'm done with this. Is it any good?

Yeah, sound good as an idea for something that suppose to happen along the way in this track (about 2min mark for me) - like this bass become secondary sound replace by some lead playing different melodic part - also kick could be a bit punchier (at least for me) -> so yeah, good idea so far which need to be develop farther.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Cam someone give me their ears on this, the football club track I'm doing. I seem to have too much bass, do you agree? I should re-do the crowd chant, it sounds nasty.

Richard - sounds design and melodic line is really sweet man, I like overall idea but structure in this short WIP is not clicking with me so far (like this 0:30 min mark where I expected something different to take place) - but I also understand that this is just an idea and can evolve to quite a massive production in the future my friend.

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Anyone Like iT?? i Hate it!

Still going to wait for more comments on this before will offer my perspective but I believe that this is still recoverable concept lol

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Cam someone give me their ears on this, the football club track I'm doing. I seem to have too much bass, do you agree? I should re-do the crowd chant, it sounds nasty.

It's fine, there's not too much bass for me. Sounds great. Except crowd.

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Anyone Like iT?? i Hate it!

Bass and strings are ok (1:00 - 1:55). Lead is kinda tiring to me.

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Anyone Like iT?? i Hate it!

Sounds like a loop on top of which someone is mashing the keyboards.

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Last edited by TranceLover007 on Jun-18-2015 at 05:17

Darek as you know I have really admired some of your works lately but sorry man this does not a lot for me all round. It's just ok melodically.

This mix is not to your usual standard, the vocals are hard to decipher, way too much bid / bass in them and they clash with the synths even though the vocals are very loud. The kick is old fashioned and wooly, the early intro synth part is clumsy, damn this is nasty feeback, sorry Darek.

Sorry Man, I cant love them all, and I know this can make one feel a bit down but I wont compromise on honest feedback.

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I'm going to have to agree - the mixdown is just completely off. The beat is almost inaudible and mushy, while the vocals are so loud they drown everything else out.

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