so here it is



thanks for the comments!

struggled big time with this one. started on wednesday, was gonna be more of a techno thumper
listened back on thursday, wasnt working so changed it into what you hear now, spent a couple of hours thursday deciding how to use the vocals, got a new bassline going then arranged it yesterday

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Thanks everybody for the comments, I will rework some details and probably repost.

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Originally posted by evo8 so here it is thanks for the comments! struggled big time with this one. started on wednesday, was gonna be more of a techno thumper listened back on thursday, wasnt working so changed it into what you hear now, spent a couple of hours thursday deciding how to use the vocals, got a new bassline going then arranged it yesterday

well rounded track evo.

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Originally posted by SystematicX1

This is lovely. Especially the reverb/delay you have dripping off the vocal, it's pristine and right up my alley. How did you achieve it?

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Originally posted by evo8 so here it is thanks for the comments! struggled big time with this one. started on wednesday, was gonna be more of a techno thumper listened back on thursday, wasnt working so changed it into what you hear now, spent a couple of hours thursday deciding how to use the vocals, got a new bassline going then arranged it yesterday

Had to listen to this again. So very, very good. It's a really summer-y kind of track, if that makes sense.

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Originally posted by deegee This is lovely. Especially the reverb/delay you have dripping off the vocal, it's pristine and right up my alley. How did you achieve it?

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Originally posted by SystematicX1

Thats pretty damn good sounding considering Live's builtin reverb.

Really like the track by the way, great vocal, songwriting, and production all around. No gripes here!

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@evo8: Nice work on that remix! Sounding really good. I wish I could give you some constructive criticism but I can't find any issues with the track.

I need to work on making one as well but I have been struggling to live up the original track haha.

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Heres a techno jam session I recorded live today, any feedback on what works or what doesn't would be great

Last edited by djnitride on May-30-2015 at 22:52

Thanks man...this track is turning out to be a special one for me. Appreciate the feedback!!

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Originally posted by deegee Fan-fucking-tastic on all fronts. As usual your technical skills are top notch, and this flows really nicely. More, please.

Its good to see that you're back. Thanks so much for the comments. I would very much like to hear from you bro, your turn.

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Originally posted by cryophonik OK, here's the remix pack (see the readme file for song info, crediting, etc): http://tinyurl.com/lmhg6xs

This is will be my current project, time for some fun.

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Originally posted by djnitride Thats pretty damn good sounding considering Live's builtin reverb. Really like the track by the way, great vocal, songwriting, and production all around. No gripes here! ------------- @evo8: Nice work on that remix! Sounding really good. I wish I could give you some constructive criticism but I can't find any issues with the track. I need to work on making one as well but I have been struggling to live up the original track haha. ------------- Heres a techno jam session I recorded live today, any feedback on what works or what doesn't would be great

this is subjective but for me the kick would have to be a lot heavier and a bit more distorted, the bass is good
i would like it to have heavier hats as well and some percussion to drive things along

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Originally posted by LoveHate

Lovely mix and a catchy number. It is just asking for summer vocals. Maybe grunge up the piano a bit as the track progresses, perhaps with some hi passed slap back reverb etc, just to give a sense of journey.

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Originally posted by evo8 so here it is

It needs a a better bassline in my opine, as it sounds sorta under nourished / unresolved. Like the floatey vocals, but think sometimes it would do to hear them more clearly with less fx drenching.

The odd attention grabbing stab would give it further interest.

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