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Originally posted by gcazali Not sure how this part of the forum works, but nice to find that people are active on this part Here its my remix i did for a great friend and a good musician, hope you like it (its in free download) Progressive, wierd dance stuff, hope you like it Jono Jones & Estefani Brolo - Swimming (gabriel Cazali Rmx) Free download

please use this forum instead http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74

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Originally posted by evo8 the arp that comes in around 40 seconds is class, really dark or something, i would use it as the foundation, i dont really like where you take the track later on, i would make something really dark with that arp but thats probably not the direction you want to go

Yeah, absolutely love that ARP sound, C-16 on the TB-3. I wrote the track around that originally, tried to integrate it into more of the track but was having some issues making it work. Might give it another shot and add a bit more of a darker progression / atmosphere as that's kinda what I was originally going for but got carried away in the 2nd part of the track.

Hi guys,this is a track ive just about finished - a homage to the 1999 era of Trance. Any comments appreciated

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Originally posted by adam_rodriguez Hi guys,this is a track ive just about finished - a homage to the 1999 era of Trance. Any comments appreciated

reminds me a bit of Out Of The Blue but the mixdown is a bit muddy, i think that staccato lead is taking a bit too much space, could do with some low-mid removed, maybe it has too much reverb? whatever it is the mix isnt really gelling together imo

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more techno style this one

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[QUOTE]Originally posted by djnitride
Here is a track I have been working on some this weekend... Does it work from a conceptual level? I realize the percussion and mixing need work. I havn't gone into mixing deep yet and am just getting close to finishing the arrangement:



I like it. Especially arps .. The only thing bothers me is a bit strange chord transition on 2:24, something sounds off to me.

Something i've been working on yesterday.

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Originally posted by evo8 more techno style this one

That is just very, very nice Evo...

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Originally posted by adam_rodriguez Hi guys,this is a track ive just about finished - a homage to the 1999 era of Trance. Any comments appreciated

Good stuff, wish trance was more like this again.

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Originally posted by evo8 more techno style this one

Your getting as bad as me lol, you need to finish some of your tracks and get them out there!!!


Alright guys...

Here's a remix I've been working on for Cryo.. Go easy on me its my first ever vocal track and its just basically my take on Daves original so chords and melody are all his doing I've just basically reworked it but in a more trance kind of way..



Its not completely finished so as per per feedback and any suggestions are more then welcome.



Cheers

Andy and Dave nice work, it flows well.

My only critique is you need to work the vocals;

1) sometimes I'm hearing something weird almost like the vocal is run through little bursts of rapid wah/wah

2) Remove a little mids from the vocal to bring it out

3) Layer it - some quiet layers, different eqs and slightly moved

4) needs pleanty of long tails delays and automated hi pass verbs (probably 3)

5) autpmated fx such as chorus here n there


Also a few vocal fx stabs in the drop

I love doing vocals so always feel fee to pm me

The key with vocals is lots of automation - for example less delay in the mix as each word is sung, more delay in the mix just after each word

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Andy and Dave nice work, it flows well. My only critique is you need to work the vocals; 1) sometimes I'm hearing something weird almost like the vocal is run through little bursts of rapid wah/wah 2) Remove a little mids from the vocal to bring it out 3) Layer it - some quiet layers, different eqs and slightly moved 4) needs pleanty of long tails delays and automated hi pass verbs (probably 3) 5) autpmated fx such as chorus here n there Also a few vocal fx stabs in the drop I love doing vocals so always feel fee to pm me The key with vocals is lots of automation - for example less delay in the mix as each word is sung, more delay in the mix just after each word

Some good tips there Richard, I'll see what I can do.

Thanks