Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's something I've been working on. Any thoughts?
Man, what a Day!!!! - I miss another one - it is got to be a Monday !!!
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
EVO - as above I will focus on bass and also the kick as you suggest top see if a tweak pays dividends. I have listened over for this place where lead starts to distort, I'm not sure what you mean. It may be because later on there is more going on?
dont mind me, only a minor gripe really could have been the headphones i was listening on, the track is nice
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Man, what a Day!!!! - I miss another one - it is got to be a Monday !!!
Cheers
AND..it's back...Thanks Richard..lol I wasn't done listening either
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Jun-03-2013 18:31
TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's something I've been working on. Any thoughts?
My thoughts without reading anybody else comments Richard - first what I notice it this funny volume fx like automation (volume slightly increase and decrease particularly in the end lol), my second observation is the I would like to have your bass layers a bit more upfront as they drive nicely this whole track and give nice energy boost, last is my complement on the vocal part - really like it man, is this you???
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Originally posted by tehlord
Just for Richard, because he asked
It's not even a WIP because it's not really a track, its' a demo for my next soundset that I haven't finished yet
This is top draw - can you make it into a track please. So casual with you - just something you 'flung' together' no doubt yet I could never make this sound. Great drive. When and if it does turn into a track give me a poke.
Jun-03-2013 19:59
tehlord
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Registered: Jan 2009
Location: Windsor
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's something I've been working on. Any thoughts?
Fucking awesome really.
I'd like to hear more stereo in those synth chords. I'd also like to see what happens if you run the vocal through a pre amp sim or something to push it into very mild Muse like distortion. Also get some separation between the vocal and the vocal FX. Oh and lose the autotune
Kickass track though.
Thanks for all the comments on mine as well. I'll probably extend it some more into something resembling a full track, but it'll only ever be a soundset demo
Originally posted by Evolve140
Been a while friends. On a deep/proggy journey lately!
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first one, nice sounds but i think the bass is mixed a bit too low? its not standing out for me, would be nice to hear an update with the bass sitting better
second one, dont like the lead and i think the sub drops all the way thru kinda kill the groove
Originally posted by evo8
yeah nice start, would need to hear the rest to see how it develops
drums are maybe a little bit basic but i dont know if they change later.....
I like the tension as the synths build.
You know you could do some things to make the drums really bring out the groove.
Firstly I think this kick is not quite right. I can imagine a clicky glichy higher kick melded with a low one where the low kick 'talk's to the bass by asking it a question to wit the bass is then the answer. This lower bass wants to be tuned down a couple of semitones or so.
Vary that hats a bit by having one or two different open whoosh hats that make an appearance say on the 7th bar of ever 8, or maybe more frequently. The closed hats are too in my face - make em sweeter and shorter and not so loud.
- it is got to be a Monday !!! 
