So I've put enormous effort into getting this finished, it's had a ton of changes, and I'm pleased with the final result.

As ever though I would appreciate any final last mix advice - whether you think the bass is correct.

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Last edited by Richard Butler on Mar-22-2015 at 17:08

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Originally posted by evo8 cool, look forward to hearing more

Well, I actually signed a contract about this track with a label yesterday

Sorry Richard but that's just too loud from my perspective. I stopped the track.

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Sorry Richard but that's just too loud from my perspective. I stopped the track.

Actually I have just re-uploaded a quieter differently mixed version just now as I too felt it was too cooked.

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Sounds good to my ears Richard, really nice track

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Originally posted by Richard Butler whether you think the bass is correct.

The second note sounds very strange to me.

Oh, now that's a different story. The track breaths.

Great ideas as usual. I really admire your perseverance and notable improvements.

However, specifically...the low end could be further polished. I can't really understand what you got down there. A sub bass, a mid bass or a combination of the two. Anyway, it sounds like you've low passed too much the bassline. The low end is there, you notice it, but it lacks some top end that makes it cut through. Lacks some bite if you know what I mean.

I think a slightly brighter and more present (but lower in volume) low end would work better for such track.

But always remember, that's just my personal perspective. You could ignore it and do whatever you wanna do.

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Originally posted by evo8 productions are pretty good, keep working on your ideas and where you want your tracks to go, what your vision is......

Thanks, evo8! Will do!

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Here's a clip of something I'm pretty excited about...

I really like this. Very chill, floaty. I'd like to hear a little more organic crunch in the drums, but that's a minor quibble. Looking forward to hearing the whole thing.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler So I've put enormous effort into getting this finished, it's had a ton of changes, and I'm pleased with the final result. As ever though I would appreciate any final last mix advice - whether you think the bass is correct.

This song just keeps getting better and better.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Well, I actually signed a contract about this track with a label yesterday

nice!

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Originally posted by Richard Butler So I've put enormous effort into getting this finished, it's had a ton of changes, and I'm pleased with the final result. As ever though I would appreciate any final last mix advice - whether you think the bass is correct.

Sounds good mate, I think I may have mentioned the bass notes in the third bar of the 4 bar phrase to you before. Sounds like the first two bars start on C then it goes to A flat for the third and fourth bar, I would have the bass playing G on the third bar and then to A flat on the fourth bar. Give it a try!