fuck me Richard, thats a really good track you've made. Well done!
Hats off to you sir!!
The only thing I'm not liking is the stutter edits at the start, its a little over used but that really is me just nitpicking.
Nov-22-2014 22:21
Oakenshield
tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2012
Location: Blackpool
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Ok the track is way more done now, I personally like break 2 and the drop there.
Any feedback on anything, mix etc is very welcome.
that is sounding a lot better why not take ur clap rev it and use the reverb at the start of the clap offset a bit to add a bit of woosh/clap for interest
Nov-23-2014 11:37
Innocence Lost
Uptight Biatch,..
Registered: Jan 2014
Location: THANK THE LORD *for* being born yelluh.
quote:
Originally posted by Andy28
fuck me Richard, thats a really good track you've made. Well done!
Hats off to you sir!!
The only thing I'm not liking is the stutter edits at the start, its a little over used but that really is me just nitpicking.
+1 It is sounding quite good Rich.
Nov-23-2014 11:39
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Ok the track is way more done now, I personally like break 2 and the drop there.
Any feedback on anything, mix etc is very welcome.
Here we go Richard, sweet work man - ready to go shopping???
Darek
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Nov-23-2014 20:10
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
Just a little melodic idea which hunting me for awhile - I guess I'm still not set on this bass line which I believe could be more driving but sounds good (at least for me) so far - lets see if you agree?
Darek
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If Trance is not clicking with you guys then this may lol - still lots of things will have to be adjust (like a structure of this track) but you could definitely hear this idea
"Digital Love"
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Just a little melodic idea which hunting me for awhile - I guess I'm still not set on this bass line which I believe could be more driving but sounds good (at least for me) so far - lets see if you agree?
Darek
I like it. Melody gets a bit distracting at 1:04, maybe save the more complex section for transitional parts or a break. It's just building up on the delay too much. The rest is awesome though!
Darius nice melodic work in the trance track there but your second track is like the background to a 1989 Jackie Chan movie as he creeps through the Chinese laundry looking for a thief,lol! But maybe that's what you intend, is this designed for gaming or something?
Originally posted by Richard Butler
"... but your second track is like the background to a 1989 Jackie Chan movie as he creeps through the Chinese laundry looking for a thief,lol! But maybe that's what you intend, is this designed for gaming or something?"
Yes, yes, how did you figure this out Richard - actually no lol just come up with this concept in about an hour so is still a very rough and a bit unorganized (at the best) but thanks for very visual description of my idea man and really appreciate your comment on my Trance idea brother.
Darek
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