i listened to this last night and i dont think the kick was loud enough so brought it up a bit
interesting suggestion on the kick richard but i think ill leave it as is or ill end up tweaking it forever
the bass is quite simple, just 2 layers from trilian, thanks for the comments everyone i will upload the full track later this eve to my soundcloud page so you can download if you want

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EDIT - updated again Saturday.
Drums tamed a bit, other synth lines added.

Any thoughts on a break - I don't know what I want to do.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Here's an update of Save Me. Still a WIP.

Lol, I didn't know you can really shine in this style Richard - 1:12 did the trick on my -> like it man!!!

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Originally posted by Richard Butler EDIT - updated again Saturday. Drums tamed a bit, other synth lines added. Any thoughts on a break - I don't know what I want to do.

thats really nice man - for a break i would keep it simple, do something with the vocals, like little snips delayed and some nice pads or something
I find that if the track is good enough before the break it doesnt really matter what the break is like as long as its not stupid

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Originally posted by evo8 i listened to this last night and i dont think the kick was loud enough so brought it up a bit interesting suggestion on the kick richard but i think ill leave it as is or ill end up tweaking it forever the bass is quite simple, just 2 layers from trilian, thanks for the comments everyone i will upload the full track later this eve to my soundcloud page so you can download if you want

Cool tune! like the style. Nice Percs!

i think it could be a bit thin between around 1k - 3k. Perhaps you could add another mid bass type layer above the sub, dunno if it would work just a suggestion - or maybe a pad or another perc layer to sit there? IMO of course

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Originally posted by Richard Butler EDIT - updated again Saturday. Drums tamed a bit, other synth lines added. Any thoughts on a break - I don't know what I want to do.

Rally nice - love the new synths you added and i think vocals sound way better

great atmosphere

I may be wrong but i think the sub isn't coming through quite enough, o quite consistent enough for a dnb track

Maybe some big minor 7th chords for the break, nice chilled filtered down chords?

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Heres an early WIP

Very rough

Not much detail either

Not sure about the break maybe not the right feel for this track?

Any thoughts welcome

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Originally posted by chris marsh Heres an early WIP Very rough Not much detail either Not sure about the break maybe not the right feel for this track? Any thoughts welcome

i love the first couple of minutes, that synth is really nice and gritty, very nice

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This is a cool thread. TBH I figured that it would die a miserable death within the first few pages, but you guys have done a great job keeping it on track. [/OT blabber]

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Originally posted by evo8 i love the first couple of minutes, that synth is really nice and gritty, very nice

Thanks mate. I think your right it maybe goes off track after the first couple of mins - not really liking that bit so much.

Any more takers?

@cryophonic Im liking this thread too mate

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Last edited by chris marsh on Apr-28-2013 at 08:06

Here's another one.

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Originally posted by chris marsh Heres an early WIP Very rough Not much detail either Not sure about the break maybe not the right feel for this track? Any thoughts welcome

Bloomin nice this, mins me of cold blue's style. Get some cool counter melos and layers comming into that lead and your set. Maybe some accoustic sounding lead layers comming in such as a melodically played flutish thang.