Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California
quote:
Originally posted by Storyteller
This one is quite cool. Deep dark cave style techno.
Very generic progression and trance sound. Nice mood and vibe though. Maybe spend a bit more time on tightening that mix and you can easily put in some oldschool trance mix .
I got this one, spent a bit of time on it this morning. Quite generic and can go either way. Some suggestions would be appreciated . The picture in there is to annoy one of my friends .
For some reason I feel like I should stick to the base and keep it simple with maybe some vocal.
Not much to go on. Sound good from a sound design stand point to me. But it is kinda generic so far.
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The only thing I used from the original was the vocals. Appreciate any feedback.
Oof, I love that original track (quickly downloaded the stems just now to remove the forced likes and application access right afterwards). Although I don't think it is quite what they're looking for in the remix competition the track sounds okay. At around the 3:50 mark I do expect more of a climax than I hear now, maybe build some more anticipation and tension there before the climax?
Mixwise I feel the energy that is in the music is absent in the beats. Overall quite well mixed but it just needs more punch in my opinion.
The only thing I used from the original was the vocals. Appreciate any feedback.
Overall, I see where your going on this track. I actually dig the groove as it is constant and moving (for the most part).
There are certain areas of the arrangement that stick out in the mix a bit to much imo , but for the most part the mix is solid. There is a slight muddiness to the mix but that could very well be remedied or maybe its your artistic imprint. Either way, it has alot of clean elements.
Nice Work !!
Registered: Jul 2008
Location: Buenos Aires, Argentina
Hi there,
This is a short preview for the latest track I was working on. It's kind of an uplifting/tech/acid stuff.
Any comments will be appreciated
cheers!
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Apr-03-2014 15:18
Trancelover03591
Trained tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California
quote:
Originally posted by Storyteller
Thanks for the feedback on my tiny soundbyte guys!
Oof, I love that original track (quickly downloaded the stems just now to remove the forced likes and application access right afterwards). Although I don't think it is quite what they're looking for in the remix competition the track sounds okay. At around the 3:50 mark I do expect more of a climax than I hear now, maybe build some more anticipation and tension there before the climax?
Mixwise I feel the energy that is in the music is absent in the beats. Overall quite well mixed but it just needs more punch in my opinion.
I would be interested to see you do an entry since you like the original, there is still time to enter!
quote:
Originally posted by scorpradio
Overall, I see where your going on this track. I actually dig the groove as it is constant and moving (for the most part).
There are certain areas of the arrangement that stick out in the mix a bit to much imo , but for the most part the mix is solid. There is a slight muddiness to the mix but that could very well be remedied or maybe its your artistic imprint. Either way, it has alot of clean elements.
Nice Work !!
I wish the muddiness was a creative decision but it is just a weakness in my mixing/sound design tbh.
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Originally posted by evo8
would like the kick to have more thump
@storyteller, not much to go on so hard to judge :-/
I am not very adept at choosing kicks!
Thanks for the feedback guys, kind of confirms my thoughts on the song. Still some weaknesses in my production but with some improvements overall I hope.
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If less is more think about how much more more would be.
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Apr-03-2014 16:15
Trancelover03591
Trained tranceaddict
Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California
quote:
Originally posted by Storyteller
Maybe. I don't think the original can be improved much though .
I thought taking it in a different direction entirely would make remixing it more worthwhile. The contest rule page says they are open to different interpretations.
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Registered: Jul 2008
Location: Buenos Aires, Argentina
didn't know it, BTW page 1 of 138 it's too much to read
I'll give feedback to the last track posted
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Latest releases
Grey Clouds/Oxygen [Dub Tech Recordings]
Searching for [Mindlifting Records]
Apple's Mind [Mindlifting Records]
Artur Salizar Vs MaxDV Scale - Fallen in Too Deep (Beamrider Miami Anthem Remix)[Undervise Records]
Steven Force - Like a Shadow (Beamrider Remix) [Overtmind Records]
Beamrider - Missing [Linger Records]
Paul Hided - In search of serenity (Beamrider Remix) [Linger Records]
Apr-04-2014 01:32
theterran
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2010
Location: Texass
quote:
Originally posted by evo8
your supposed to post feedback on the latest track in the thread before looking for feedback on your own - the rules are on page 1
Yeah...nobody did that for my track...less hypocrisy in this thread please. Not that I mind...Just silly to get after someone about that.
Simple solution : Don't post any feedback for him. End-of, problem solved.
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