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Originally posted by Richard Butler During my techno phase last yr this was the kinda feel I went for with lots of dirty background ambience. Nice under the arches club feel. Like your beats a lot - is the main kick loop your own?

cool man, its needs a few tweaks here and there after listening to it a few times
yes the kick is just a sample

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Originally posted by evo8 ive posted a good bit of feedback so heres your chance to get your own back on me haha firstly this is an attempt at that something more "trancy" and then this is what ive been predominately trying to make - something more on the dubbier side...... thanks peeps

Would like to hear the 1st wip finished, sounds promising, as for 2nd don't know what to say beside that it sounds well mixed, not a fan of the genre xD

My wip again, hope the kick fits better now with the rest the track :s

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Still working on finding/making some sound FX for more flavor. (it's so haaaard finding good FX)

Everything mostly dialed in to just past the main build.

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[i] My wip again, hope the kick fits better now with the rest the track :s

Like this also, though where did that melody come from? I swear to god I've heard that melody before somewhere...

Transitions are pretty cool in this!. kick seems fine too

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Originally posted by theterran Like this also, though where did that melody come from? I swear to god I've heard that melody before somewhere... Transitions are pretty cool in this!. kick seems fine too

Ugh yes, I seem to recognize it aswell, something alice deejay era.

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Originally posted by Deillon Ugh yes, I seem to recognize it aswell, something alice deejay era.

Kinda reminds me of the hook from Coast to Coast - Home


Oddly enough, it also reminds me of Scot Project - C1 hook to

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Originally posted by evo8 nice one man! heres a little snip of one i did today, opinions?

This one is quite cool. Deep dark cave style techno.

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Originally posted by constantin Would like to hear the 1st wip finished, sounds promising, as for 2nd don't know what to say beside that it sounds well mixed, not a fan of the genre xD My wip again, hope the kick fits better now with the rest the track :s

Very generic progression and trance sound. Nice mood and vibe though. Maybe spend a bit more time on tightening that mix and you can easily put in some oldschool trance mix .






I got this one, spent a bit of time on it this morning. Quite generic and can go either way. Some suggestions would be appreciated . The picture in there is to annoy one of my friends .



For some reason I feel like I should stick to the base and keep it simple with maybe some vocal.

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Originally posted by Storyteller I got this one, spent a bit of time on it this morning. Quite generic and can go either way. Some suggestions would be appreciated . The picture in there is to annoy one of my friends . For some reason I feel like I should stick to the base and keep it simple with maybe some vocal.

The bassline has yet another nostalgic feel, like a Robin S (Show Me Love). However, it feels a little flat.
The stabs seem a little out of place as well, just my opinion

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Originally posted by Storyteller For some reason I feel like I should stick to the base and keep it simple with maybe some vocal.

Sounds alright when the pads come in and fills it out a bit more. Yeah stick with what you have and add a vocal if possible.

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Originally posted by Storyteller This one is quite cool. Deep dark cave style techno. Very generic progression and trance sound. Nice mood and vibe though. Maybe spend a bit more time on tightening that mix and you can easily put in some oldschool trance mix . I got this one, spent a bit of time on it this morning. Quite generic and can go either way. Some suggestions would be appreciated . The picture in there is to annoy one of my friends . For some reason I feel like I should stick to the base and keep it simple with maybe some vocal.

I think you need to make that bass sound more percussive for it to work.

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Storyteller I really dig it, it just flows and speaks for itself. Maybe that key perc sound a tad quieter.