Finished this one, the idea comes from the thread of making the tracks more stereo, i made this atmospheric track with lots of panning and background elements.
Apr-18-2013 12:53
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
Here's an uplifting trancer by me, i guess this is my roots.
JP - I prefer the uplifting transer to the prog track. Sounding nice n clear - is this the intro - will there be some chord changes?
RODRI - that bird tweeting sound is way too distracting. If you really want to use I'd suggest it makes a rare appearance here n there as it adds nothing to the groove or anything.
Apr-19-2013 12:10
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
Yes there will def be some chord changes, i started it around 6 am today and will finish it, cheers. It is the intro, yes to that.
I like the presence of the kick but maybe is too overpowering, at what dbs is peaking? Bassline is great but the pykes and mid bassline sound horrible to me i'd use totally different sounds. Pads seem fine too, love the sfx sample similar to PvD - Nothing but you
Apr-19-2013 19:33
Juan Paulino
Come Away O Human Child
Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
Pykes? its only one bass and its a Moog one with one note.
I called it pykes because i don't find more suitable words to describe it, i am referring to the sound that just plays a note from 0:00 and the upper bassline that starts at 0:29
Edit: And Richard thanks for your opinion, the whole track spins around the field recording so i think would feel too empty without it, maybe is a track that requires more than a listen to start feeling it i was not very enthusiastic with it but finished it very quickly when i started getting that feeling.
Originally posted by Richard Butler
New wip - will re-do vocals and add more of them.
Any thoughts so far?
Sorry for youtube - can't upload to SC right now.
Like it sounds nice
Really nice snare, how did you get that sound? lots of compression?
Perhaps you could have a break (drum beak i mean) set low in the background to glue the drums together more and give a slighy live feel?
Personally im not to keen on the vocals i would be inclined to get someone in (i would like female vocals on it, but i know thats not very original and its only my opinion)
I think it sounds pretty legit mate!
Would love to contribute myself but seem to be in an endless cycle of starting things, getting fed up with them and not finishing at the mo. Perhaps ill but up a little idea later
Edit- maybe post this up on dogs on acid when finished? Might be cool to get some opinions over there it might go down well
Last edited by chris marsh on Apr-20-2013 at 21:13
Apr-20-2013 10:35
Zak McKracken
Trance
Registered: Jun 2003
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Finished in 12 hours plus I went to see oblivion in imax.
how do u manage to make all the elements out of key again, just like the last track. i seriosly doubt that you have any ear for melody. the production is pretty good though, maybe you should make techno/prog instead, without melody!
