Been working on songwriting lately (song structure, chord progression, key changes, ect) and I am really interested in melodic acoustic stuff; piano, classical guitar, ukulele and others. I wrote this song for piano (I am not playing it btw, I wrote it note by note and changed a lot of the note velocities to give it a natural feel). There isn't really that much to give feedback on (just a piano) but I thought I would post it since it is something a little different.

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Last edited by Trancelover03591 on Feb-21-2014 at 22:54

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Originally posted by Andy28 Cheers

Sounds good! bass & kick work well & sound nice and tight. you could try more variation on transitions (0.27) to keep it interesting

Edit; Just used the same vox sample in a new track .. must be a veela sample am hearing these everywhere!

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Last edited by jf2010 on Feb-22-2014 at 15:17

New track here, still in progress so levels are a bit off any feedback on this would be great. cheers

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Originally posted by Andy28 Can't really add much to what has already been said. Nice track though great atmos you have going on. Been working loads lately so haven't had time to play about much. Had most of this weekend free so decided to give studio one a try out again, a nice alternative to ableton. Here's my first wip from it Cheers

nice start!

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Been working on songwriting lately (song structure, chord progression, key changes, ect) and I am really interested in melodic acoustic stuff; piano, classical guitar, ukulele and others. I wrote this song for piano (I am not playing it btw, I wrote it note by note and changed a lot of the note velocities to give it a natural feel). There isn't really that much to give feedback on (just a piano) but I thought I would post it since it is something a little different.

very nice, like it!

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Originally posted by jf2010 New track here, still in progress so levels are a bit off any feedback on this would be great. cheers

yeah this is pretty good for this style of music, nice

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Originally posted by evo8 yeah this is pretty good for this style of music, nice

Cheers man , glad u like

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591

This would make a good track you should work on it. If not, send me the midi

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Originally posted by jf2010

Great sounding track. Could maybe benefit from a proper lead sound and melody on top of those chords, just something simple. The piano thing is what I always do myself but its not working for me going along as it is hitting them notes the same as the rest. Try mixing it up a bit.

Well done!!

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Been working on songwriting lately (song structure, chord progression, key changes, ect) and I am really interested in melodic acoustic stuff; piano, classical guitar, ukulele and others. I wrote this song for piano (I am not playing it btw, I wrote it note by note and changed a lot of the note velocities to give it a natural feel). There isn't really that much to give feedback on (just a piano) but I thought I would post it since it is something a little different.

Good melo and playing, what piano are you using, sounds great?

DARK AIR - you execute your tracks very well, good work on this one.

Here is my last WIP which was called English Boys but it's taken a light hearted turn.

Does it need an 'epic' synth passage at the end (where the track currently ends)?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Here is my last WIP which was called English Boys but it's taken a light hearted turn. Does it need an 'epic' synth passage at the end (where the track currently ends)?

i dunno man, not feeling this one :-/

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