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Originally posted by jf2010 New track here would be great to get some feedback, starts off a bit techy then into trance ,nice one

It reminds me of the stuff I used to hear when tuned in DI.fm around ~'06 xD

my WIP xD

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Originally posted by Constantin my WIP xD

Trance is so beautiful when dynamic. Over compression destroys music, people doesn't seem to realize it.
Hope yours was a conscious choice.

That said, the piano is badly placed imo. It's a central element narrating the story of the track. It shouldn't be put apart.
But at the end is a matter of taste. If you like it that way go for it and ignore me.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Been a busy boy =] https://soundcloud.com/fallisjesse/...l-warped-psyche

Astonishing work. Kick is ace!

Greatly built, keeps your interest.

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Trance is so beautiful when dynamic. Over compression destroys music, people doesn't seem to realize it. Hope yours was a conscious choice. That said, the piano is badly placed imo. It's a central element narrating the story of the track. It shouldn't be put apart. But at the end is a matter of taste. If you like it that way go for it and ignore me.

Thank you for the feedback! Did I beefed up the lead to much xD ?

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Been a busy boy =] https://soundcloud.com/fallisjesse/...l-warped-psyche

Really kept my interest, good sound design, will be giving it more listens.

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Originally posted by Constantin my WIP xD

Beautiful melody mate, I think this is great trance, but that lead that comes in about 1.50 needs to get wet with fx as the piano begins to fade as its way too dry.

Anyway, here's the track I posted a couple of weeks back. Can you let me have some thoughts before I finish it.


Cheers

Thanks for checking the tune guys. Rich cool tune but to me the trancey elements together with DNB don't work well for me. I like this kind of music served dark. Production seems pretty spot on though.

if you guys have anything you want me to check just post it here and i'll look at it and give you some feedback.

just finished this up yesterday:

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Anyway, here's the track I posted a couple of weeks back. Can you let me have some thoughts before I finish it. Cheers

The intro is very nice - I like the atmospheric elements a lot. The vocal sounds good for the most part but does sound strained in some places. I really do like this track a lot though. The percussion is really cool and I like how distant it sounds. Lots of neat percussion and FX in there. Nice work dude!

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Originally posted by Constantin my WIP xD

Uplifting! I like the progression even if it's a little cliched.


I've finished Gravity. It's rather different from when I posted it a while ago, and the 2nd drop is completely changed. I'm EXTREMELY proud of it.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Anyway, here's the track I posted a couple of weeks back. Can you let me have some thoughts before I finish it. Cheers

As Seandroid mentioned, very atmospheric. About vocals don't know what to say I am not a fan of vocals in electronic music, so will you make a dub version also xD ?


I've finished Gravity. It's rather different from when I posted it a while ago, and the 2nd drop is completely changed. I'm EXTREMELY proud of it.

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Very dirty and melodic, very interesting for my ears

Seandroid, you pulled off a very pro piece of work there. I particularly enjoyed the intro with it's melodic romp.


Thanks for the feedback people, will re-do the vocals and add more lyrics - the ones in there were a rough and ready test with tv and pets noise in the back ground!

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Thanks for checking the tune guys. Rich cool tune but to me the trancey elements together with DNB don't work well for me. I like this kind of music served dark. Production seems pretty spot on though. if you guys have anything you want me to check just post it here and i'll look at it and give you some feedback. just finished this up yesterday:

cool track, love the trippy-ness in places!! maybe a touch more volume on that detuned saw lead? like 2db max just to bring it up more in focus?? but thats nitpicking

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Anyway, here's the track I posted a couple of weeks back. Can you let me have some thoughts before I finish it. Cheers

Don't know what you did there, but I don't feel it anymore.
Maybe if I could reference it versus the previous version I might tell you what happened.
At first sight low end ain't that involving anymore, but vocals improved a lot this time.

Is the bass on this one ok?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Is the bass on this one ok?

Man, are you ok?

Everything is so squashed and loud. My poor ears.

agree, just no space at all, bass seems to drowned out

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Originally posted by Innocence Lost

Hello there, your arp bass sounds bit to shy compared with the sub one and for my ears that clap is bit to clicky xD.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Is the bass on this one ok?

Did the mistake to listen it 1st on my headphones with the volume cranked to max, sir you owe me a new pair of ear drums! Anyway I miss the low frequencies in your bass you had in previous wip posted

Astral Projection - Dancing Galaxy remix

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Originally posted by Constantin Hello there, your arp bass sounds bit to shy compared with the sub one and for my ears that clap is bit to clicky xD.

thanks man

Re: Astral Projection - Dancing Galaxy remix

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Originally posted by martinleblanc

Howdy! I am not 100% sure about the clicks from 3:12, I would like to hear the lead more then those. In rest your project sounds pretty solid

I finished (I think xD) the wip I posted previously, tried to take in consideration your advice. I wait your final thoughts on it ^^

New Cirklon live track, P12, Voyager, Minitaur, Phatty, TT-303, Acidlab Miami and Tempest + some foogers recorded live directly from console in DSD

Bit of dubtechno, house, bit of trance riffs, some soundscapes, a mixed bag I guess, close your eyes sit back and relax..... it gets deeper along the way...

little disclaimer: Since my Cirklon I on make live recordings directly into a console, I no longer use a DAW and all mutes, FX fades
don't look for polished tracks, I like them in the rough

Re: Astral Projection - Dancing Galaxy remix

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Originally posted by martinleblanc

I find the kick a bit loud and there is a bit too much 150-300hz to my taste but further nice track

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