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Originally posted by MSZ sounds really nice gordan, reminds me of older prog with a funk edge. I would eq down the lower end of the gating low mid arpy stab and add a really nice bass, but thats just me.

Thanks, i'm just not sure i can make that really nice bass , i'll try.

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Originally posted by MSZ add a really nice bass

workin on it....





Phil

Here's something

pm me, solo the bass and send it to me ill show you my thought process on what I would do to process your bass, take off any effects, download reason 10 demo either make an account or ill give you my login.

https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/endless

More or less done, now could u tell me if I should re-do the vocals, or have less of them in here?

Sorry cant embed SC just now. Shortly I will be able to once I'm done creating a new alter-ego for all my new tracks.

Oh and another vocal track for your deliberation, any crits welcome and very much needed lol

More chilled than the track above I posted

https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/midnight-son1

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Oh and another vocal track for your deliberation, any crits welcome and very much needed lol More chilled than the track above I posted https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/midnight-son1

if you had a gangnam style parody video, you'd be a billionaire.

maybe this is too noisy

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Oh and another vocal track for your deliberation, any crits welcome and very much needed lol More chilled than the track above I posted https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/midnight-son1

Richard,

IMHO on this particular track, the Vox cut does not work, unlike some of your others. And personally, I do not think it is needed any way.
On the other side, I really really like this and as it seems we all are taking a retro feel in our music as of late, it is very appropriate and catchy. I really like the movement in your composition and really great arrangement tones.
I for sure want to see this fully developed and possibly a new favorite from you.
If there was anything that I could critique well there was one area.
Curious. Is this track in mono? It seems narrow in the mix.

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Originally posted by MSZ maybe this is too noisy

It is a bit imo, but has nice chords and progression, it's worth to play more with this

@Richard - was listening both of your tracks few days ago, didn't comment anything cause tbh didn't really like neither. I've heard crazy nice and creative tracks from you but these are not among them imo

Any good?

What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness

Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.

Darek

Here is my another chillout WIP

Thanks Darek, it wasn't intentional jazzy, it just happened that way

This wip of yours is nice and sounds good, but tbh nothing memorable imho, i liked some of your prev chill tracks more than this one.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit. Darek Here is my another chillout WIP

theres something about that slap bass that is not sitting well for me, think something to do with the pitch(maybe tuned too flat?), but nice work.



i've been wrestling this wip for a while, not making much progress maybe slowly inching forward. the mix is off, not sure how im going to sequence it or keep it.

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Originally posted by MSZ theres something about that slap bass that is not sitting well for me, think something to do with the pitch(maybe tuned too flat?), but nice work. i've been wrestling this wip for a while, not making much progress maybe slowly inching forward. the mix is off, not sure how im going to sequence it or keep it.

Thanks Mac for taking your time and listen to my WIP - as far as this "slap" bass line statement, I will have to check it out because there is two of those basses working together (one is flat one) and the balance may be shifted a bit out of proportion, thanks

Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?

Cheers,

Darek

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Originally posted by gordan100 ..... but tbh nothing memorable imho.......

Appreciate your comment man - any suggestion what memorable element/s would you like to hear in this WIP?

Cheers,

Darek

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Appreciate your comment man - any suggestion what memorable element/s would you like to hear in this WIP? Cheers, Darek

I don't know Darek, it sounds nice and everything but it's like i already heard dozens of tracks like that

Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?

whats freq shifting? dont think I have anything that does that except maybe the vocoder. its probably pretty wide, I dont mono stuff.

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Originally posted by MSZ I dont mono stuff.

o.O

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit. Darek Here is my another chillout WIP

I enjoyed the synths and sounds all but feel the drums aren't Human enough, and they sound a bit lumpy and basic. You get some great synth pluks.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)

For me your nicest sound yet, a lovely piece, finish it

What reverb are you using I love how it sounds

Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys

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Originally posted by Richard Butler For me your nicest sound yet, a lovely piece, finish it What reverb are you using I love how it sounds

Thanks, will try. I'm using fl reverb 2, comes with fl studio.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler

It seems to quiet. Kick is to powerful? I like the idea, it gets a bit samey after while for me, maybe needs some cutting or more work on the arrangement.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys

This may be great track man but your dynamics and sound level is not letting this production shine the most - don't know if this will help Richard.

Darek

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