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Originally posted by Evolve140 Stayed up way too fucking long banging this shit out. Mixdown feedback particularly appreciated since I'm getting used to these Audio Technica's. Feedback in general also appreciated. Fuck, time to smoke a cigarette and drink some water and sober up. Did a bunch of adderall and worked on this for like 10 hours. Fuck I'm insane. Cheers mateys.

As usual, you have a lot of cool stuff going on. Overall, I don't feel like it comes together in this version. The main reason is the vocals don't seem quite in time to me. It is kind of feels like this is a live performance with a sampler or something. But I think this is close to being something cool, especially if the vocals can fit right.

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Originally posted by Deillon I like the bassline in the end more then the rest, puts the emphasis on the clap. Here's something of me, been a while since I made something.

Personally, I like the atmospheric synth kind of tracks. On the synth with the delays, there sounds like a little distortion, which I think might sound better without it. Overall the song isn't that current sounding to me, kind of a 90's feel, but that that might be the style you are going for.

@TranceLover007
Thanks, I know it's not much, I haven't made anything due to 9 months of fulltime work, so I was happy I came up with something. Ill update this lateron.
@MSZ
There is a lack of bass? I am using headphones and i'm not used to mixing with these. Could use pointers.
@wayfinder
it was intended, ive used sublte basses all the time. Ill probably drop the env mod so itll sound less aggressive.
@Trancelover03591
I was going for james holden sound, didnt work apparently

Just wanting to put my own shit in thats all I love putting my shit in places

new track on the go here,

any thoughts on it would be great

https://soundcloud.com/joeyfaherty2010/undercurrent/s-hreZq

Yea.



Any feedback would be generous.

Howz this and the mixing?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Howz this and the mixing?

Listening on a laptop so cant really comment on mixing but the track itself sounds very cool, nice edge to it

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Originally posted by jf2010 new track on the go here, any thoughts on it would be great http://soundcloud.com/joeyfaherty2010/undercurrent

There is nothing in your link mate!

Thanks for the comments - the mixing is dreadful on my work pc speakers today - damned I need someone to mix this.

The bass is taking over - I keep shaving away low frequency content - even automating the low freqs to fit with the drums but it's still way too much but when I shave low freqs away it doesn't sound nearly as good and juicey on my studio monitors.

Any suggestions? Do I just keep on removing more low freqs and be brutal about it?

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Originally posted by jf2010 new track on the go here, any thoughts on it would be great https://soundcloud.com/joeyfaherty2...current/s-hreZq

guess it sounds good? i dont really listen to this type of music

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Originally posted by Juan Paulino Yea. Any feedback would be generous.

not sure about that kick, wondering what a 909 style kick would sound like there instead

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Howz this and the mixing?

not really digging it Richard, sorry.....

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Originally posted by Juan Paulino Yea. Any feedback would be generous.

as much as ive commented on your lack of ear for melody you still just put together loops in different keys? cant you hear its not matching? did you get a midi keyboard and try to learn basic keys to avoid this yet? i dont understand what you get out of just putting some random loops together in a 2min intro then start over. wheres the theme? wheres the melody? wheres the drive? wheres what we are to like about the track? its sounds exactly like the rest of your wips, i feel you are actually using the same drum loops in all of them.

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Originally posted by evo8 not sure about that kick, wondering what a 909 style kick would sound like there instead

Its a basic vengeance uplifting trance kick.

It stays. 909 is kinda outdated.

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Originally posted by Juan Paulino Its a basic vengeance uplifting trance kick. It stays. 909 is kinda outdated.

and vengeance isnt? rofl.

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Originally posted by clay and vengeance isnt? rofl.

Its 3 kicks layered.

24/db low pass, high pass,

Bandpass for the mid.

Vengeance and Alchemy put together.

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Originally posted by Juan Paulino Its 3 kicks layered. 24/db low pass, high pass, Bandpass for the mid. Vengeance and Alchemy put together.

thats original

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Originally posted by clay thats original

Were talking about kicks here idiot.

kicks cant be original? then why not use the 909 after all? it sounds alot better...

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Originally posted by clay kicks cant be original? then why not use the 909 after all? it sounds alot better...

If kicks had originality to it, everyone would using the same one dumbasss

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Originally posted by Richard Butler There is nothing in your link mate! Thanks for the comments - the mixing is dreadful on my work pc speakers today - damned I need someone to mix this. The bass is taking over - I keep shaving away low frequency content - even automating the low freqs to fit with the drums but it's still way too much but when I shave low freqs away it doesn't sound nearly as good and juicey on my studio monitors. Any suggestions? Do I just keep on removing more low freqs and be brutal about it?

Link is updated now , bit different to d&b now tho

https://soundcloud.com/joeyfaherty2010/undercurrent/s-hreZq


With your track are you limiting the master ?

Some of the perc loops that come in sound a bit loud, maybe try get an overall balance so that you can hear everything but nothing is overpowering other elements

Cant hear the low end on laptop, but not sure if shaving the low end is a good idea, what about just lowing the volume? Is a sub part on its own causing the problems as in do you have the basses split?

juan: do you think originality is a sound property? lol. if everyone was using it it wouldn't be original anymore would it? (even though the actual sound would be the same). originality isn't objective you know.

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Originally posted by Juan Paulino Its a basic vengeance uplifting trance kick. It stays. 909 is kinda outdated.

as you wish

p.s. a 909 kick will never be outdated

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Originally posted by evo8 as you wish p.s. a 909 kick will never be outdated

That kick is the same one from the magnetic north remix.

do you even know what a 909 kick is?

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