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Originally posted by Richard Butler Sounding lush and summery mate, vocals would work well you think?

Good question Richard, I have something in my mind in the moment so we will see in a few day after I receive dry material from a girl I'm working with - I hope it will/would complement this vibe nicely

Cheers guys for your honest opinion on this

Darek

https://soundcloud.com/fallisjesse/lost-in-the-void



Got some new headphones =]

T

Tryin to catch up

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591

Oo dat drop doe, sounds like you have something potentially great here!

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Originally posted by Storyteller I hope I can redeem this one for my comments given earlier . It's really rough, but I'd love some feedback on it.

Sounds on par to the storyteller productions I know ;^

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Originally posted by kevin shawn Damn, some really good music in here! Worked on this a bit last week, not sure if it will get finished.

Enjoyed the creativity here, that twangy sound reminds me of this track from the 90's trying to remember the name now, Its always refreshing to hear more unique timbres once in a while, filthy saws ;P

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 DariusX - "Dream in Your Eyes" (Only WIP For Vocal) by DariusX.

Bugger when did you get better at mixing than me :'( I would call that candy progressive(or progressive house by beatport standards lol) with a long intro

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Yep, this is type of House I really enjoy listen to man, right stuff - like it. One thing thou, some of those (as Richard was saying) "battlestar galatica lazer sounds" need to have some either FX on it or at least push a bit back - my $0.02. Nice WIP so far !!! Cheers, Darek

thanks all, i must look at adding some subtle fx to those sounds!

any thoughts on this deeptrance number? I've spent one session on it yesterday, long story short, has to be done today. I guess its way too simple huh? Easy to remix because the stems were awesome.

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Originally posted by MSZ any thoughts on this deeptrance number? I've spent one session on it yesterday, long story short, has to be done today. I guess its way too simple huh? Easy to remix because the stems were awesome.

Yep, this sound is really lash M. - sweet way of unwinding this melodic theme in this remix - me like it.

PS. - watch for overcompressing in the final stage of your production.

Sweet !!!

Darek

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Originally posted by Evolve140 https://soundcloud.com/fallisjesse/lost-in-the-void Got some new headphones =]

Ummmmmmm, now I have a little problem Jesse as I can quite figure out why this WIP doesn't have much more emotional impact on me as it should, just because your melody and the way you structure it is simply excellent !!!

I'm not really sure but (in my opinion) this may have something to do with your drums -> either the way they sound or the pattern they are playing, I think??? - beside that I really enjoy this melodic evolution of this production my friend - well done so far J.

Darek

Thanks man, I put some more work into it so it should some more complete. More full sounding, arranged better, etc

https://soundcloud.com/fallisjesse/hip34



Will try to put some feedback love into this thread over the weekend.

Hey Jesse,

I was going to let more people comment on your track before I would give you my advice (right or wrong lol) but I thing I will do that right now as I will go home soon and don't know if will/would have time later lol.

For me (ignore if you not agree with me man) your drums sound like a studio samples and this is why you have this style disconnection with the rest of your elements in your track. Try to use a different samples and start with really simple one at the front and progressively mature it (over the time).

The rest sounds really sweet !!!

Cheers mate,

Darek

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Yep, this sound is really lash M. - sweet way of unwinding this melodic theme in this remix - me like it. PS. - watch for overcompressing in the final stage of your production. Sweet !!! Darek

Yea I screwed it up, sub bass is too loud in the break and post @_@ I also dont like the climax drop a lot, fuck it doe.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Thanks man, I put some more work into it so it should some more complete. More full sounding, arranged better, etc https://soundcloud.com/fallisjesse/hip34 Will try to put some feedback love into this thread over the weekend.

Defo more full sounding! Thats exactly what i was going to say about the last version, sounded a bit too thin in the drums department

I love the drums and bass on this. I agree w bit with Darius X - and i think the more organic, sampled sounds (like guitar or piano?) fit the style much better that the synth parts

Just my opinion but i dont like the "wailing" type synth at all - i think it detracts from the serious vibe!

I would like to hear some lush pads in this and some sounds to fill out the space a little bit more?

but i really like the vibe, nice to hear "listening" music on here too!

IMO of course

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Here is my latest effort for a vocal EDM or TranceChill (whatever you guys will/would classify this WIP lol - doesn't really matter to me). It may be known to some TA's (being few days on SC already) but would like to know if this overall atmosphere is suitable for this kind of genre - in your view? Cheers guys, Darek DariusX - "Dream in Your Eyes" (Only WIP For Vocal) by DariusX.

Lovely atmosphere! i think you got the reverb with the pads spot on. What reverb are you using btw?

Nice contrast at the drop when it sounds a lot drier

love the beat, snappy

Bass is sounding ok but in my humble opinion it could be better. Almost sounds like the bass is stereo, or beating against itself like he waveforms are detuned against each other? I think the sub would work better as a simpler, consistent, even sound. Then sidechain it once its tight.

Also perhaps you could high pass other sounds a bit more to make a bit more space down there

ATM i think the mix is just a little bit muddy and it spoils an otherwise lovely mix

IMO of course others might not think the same!

looking forward to hear th vocals

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Originally posted by MSZ any thoughts on this deeptrance number? I've spent one session on it yesterday, long story short, has to be done today. I guess its way too simple huh? Easy to remix because the stems were awesome.

Thats a lovely tune imo

how did you get it sounding so wide

Agree on the over compression. bass sounds quite distorted.

Apart from that it pretty much sounds perfect to me, kind of suff id absolutely love to make

Stayed up way too fucking long banging this shit out. Mixdown feedback particularly appreciated since I'm getting used to these Audio Technica's.

Feedback in general also appreciated.


Fuck, time to smoke a cigarette and drink some water and sober up. Did a bunch of adderall and worked on this for like 10 hours. Fuck I'm insane.

Cheers mateys.

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Originally posted by chris marsh Thats a lovely tune imo how did you get it sounding so wide Agree on the over compression. bass sounds quite distorted. Apart from that it pretty much sounds perfect to me, kind of suff id absolutely love to make

Loud sweetspots, compression, eq, saturation, reverb, chorus. basically everything, its a small progression in my world.

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Originally posted by chris marsh Lovely atmosphere! i think you got the reverb with the pads spot on. What reverb are you using btw? Nice contrast at the drop when it sounds a lot drier love the beat, snappy Bass is sounding ok but in my humble opinion it could be better. Almost sounds like the bass is stereo, or beating against itself like he waveforms are detuned against each other? I think the sub would work better as a simpler, consistent, even sound. Then sidechain it once its tight. Also perhaps you could high pass other sounds a bit more to make a bit more space down there ATM i think the mix is just a little bit muddy and it spoils an otherwise lovely mix IMO of course others might not think the same! looking forward to hear th vocals

Thanks nate for you comment and constructive analysis of my WIP.

As far as this bass line I'm using, which at the moment has too much of the tail and not enough sidechain, will need to tweak a bit farther to get what I'm after in the final stage - also I will have to locally undercut (from my bass line) some freq to make a room for different sounds (instruments).

Cheers mate for your time and effort,

Darek

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Originally posted by MSZ any thoughts on this deeptrance number? I've spent one session on it yesterday, long story short, has to be done today. I guess its way too simple huh? Easy to remix because the stems were awesome.

Damn, not much to say about it, love the atmosphere in the break!

Something to get this thread going. It sounds a little bit low in volume.

Definitely good start man - and yes this particular WIP would benefit from more dynamics in it lol - like where you going with it !!!

Cheers,

Darek

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Originally posted by Deillon Something to get this thread going. It sounds a little bit low in volume.

Nice start, I want to slide some bass under that shit doe.

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Originally posted by Deillon Damn, not much to say about it, love the atmosphere in the break! Something to get this thread going. It sounds a little bit low in volume.

really like the synth work, not so much the drums.

that arp is really tidy and neat and well-made, and i love the harmonies.

beats and bass feel like someone banging on an oildrum, all rumbly and unsubtle. this needs some andrew bayer level accompaniment =

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Originally posted by Evolve140 Stayed up way too fucking long banging this shit out. Mixdown feedback particularly appreciated since I'm getting used to these Audio Technica's. Feedback in general also appreciated. Fuck, time to smoke a cigarette and drink some water and sober up. Did a bunch of adderall and worked on this for like 10 hours. Fuck I'm insane. Cheers mateys.

im probably stupid and impatient but this moves much too slowly for my sober ears

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Originally posted by MSZ any thoughts on this deeptrance number? I've spent one session on it yesterday, long story short, has to be done today. I guess its way too simple huh? Easy to remix because the stems were awesome.

ooh this is pretty nice! i think darek had it right when he said watch for overcompression. but yeah this is dope.

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Originally posted by evo8 heres another summery attempt for me

i feel like some of the loudness levels aren't quite balanced yet.. that laser fx for example, too loud, and the chords may be a bitt too subtle. but i like the atmosphere, it's relaxed and it gives me a good vibe. maybe consider a different bassdrum thats less mid-heavy and a little deeper/cleaner/longer?

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Here is my latest effort for a vocal EDM or TranceChill (whatever you guys will/would classify this WIP lol - doesn't really matter to me). It may be known to some TA's (being few days on SC already) but would like to know if this overall atmosphere is suitable for this kind of genre - in your view? Cheers guys, Darek DariusX - "Dream in Your Eyes" (Only WIP For Vocal) by DariusX.

oooh some of these little portamentos in the intro are lovely! you got creative with the delay on the pluck chords there, it may need a secondary delay, or more reverb, to keep it together. i like the chord progression, it has the potential to be even better with a slightly less conservative melody... maybe something unusual, scene-grabbing, to help stave off the encroaching cheese

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Originally posted by MSZ any thoughts on this deeptrance number? I've spent one session on it yesterday, long story short, has to be done today. I guess its way too simple huh? Easy to remix because the stems were awesome.

The lead wanders just a bit, which is fine, but gives kind of a loungey feel in my opinion especially being kind of a vibe instrument. Maybe just a little too much sub in the mix. I think you could have done something a little cooler with the breakdown. Overall, it is a 3/5 for me. Releasable, good to listen to a couple times, though not incredibly memorable. However, sometimes it takes a couple of listens for me to really like a track.

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