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Originally posted by Vernon Wanderer I want to eat that bassline. The plucky instrument in the background is a bit too harsh while not clear at the same time.

Yeah, the EQ is probably way off right now. It's a headphone mix.

this thread has changed a bit since i last came here. what happend to the idea of comment/post? anyway i removed my stuff and feedback and might post it up again when more finished

There has been some,"flexibility" on this thread in recent past due to only a handful of people really posting anything,consistently.
Sometimes, people do not even post a track and respond to another persons wip because we truly care about one anothers work.
With that said, one who does not post a lot of tracks and only post's tracks to get feedback on their own work..well, you get what you pay for.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Here's a bit of a different take on the same track. The beat is a bit clunky atm, but it'll get sorted.

Sounds pretty nice, but the bassline compression is hurting my eardrums a tiny bit w/ headphones, kind of fatiguing to listen to.

back with my previous wip, discarded some sounds, added new etc, but it's still muddy, lacking the mental alacrity right now to mix any better.



*edit nvm, there is too much dissonance to show.

I will feedback others shortly

Is this hard sounding

Me on vocs but this is for a rapper to talk all over

Track didnt post Richard, at least I am not seeing it

I can see it ok here ..

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I will feedback others shortly Is this hard sounding Me on vocs but this is for a rapper to talk all over

Ok..I am seeing it now maybe I just needed a refresh.
So, this track....uh...DAMN son!
That bass is PHAT and the progression has a bassnectar feel to it.
A little more portamento perhaps on the tail?

On the second verse are you pitching that rolling kick? Sounds very cool

The only thing I am still trying to figure out is the intro piece.
Its very atmospheric and I dig it. It's still fresh on my ears but I am unsure if the two pieces fit together. I like the melodies on it's own but that bass progression is what stands out to me the most.
Not really sure if you are in need of a Rapper with this. Maybe just some vox glitches?

Great 'advices' thanks Systematic. I like the idea of gliched vocal snippets as I can do these myself - I do find working with vocalists so long and hassley

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I will feedback others shortly Is this hard sounding Me on vocs but this is for a rapper to talk all over

Love the parts with the bass, sounds really good and moody - the little breaks im not sure about the music in those, i know its probably meant to sound a little weird for contrast but not sure if you couldnt do something better there

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I will feedback others shortly Is this hard sounding Me on vocs but this is for a rapper to talk all over

I'm laying my head on the bass. Great, Richard. I like breaks too, but would love bass parts longer. Would buy!

Some loud thing i did

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Originally posted by gordan100 Some loud thing i did

yeah really like it!

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Originally posted by evo8 yeah really like it!

Woohooo! Thanks

Got 4 downvotes and 0 upvotes on reddit for "230 2.1 (wip)" :=). Not bad at all . Single digit downvotes always feels great!

My new weirdo...

(latest edit)

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Originally posted by gordan100 Got 4 downvotes and 0 upvotes on reddit for "230 2.1 (wip)" :=). Not bad at all . Single digit downvotes always feels great! My new weirdo...

Bah! Hate those reddit subs man...just misery. If you like it, that is all that matters.
This new track has you seemingly taken a progressive house path. Dig it and have dabbled myself in it.
Production wise it's a little muddy but could easily be cleaned up with EQ.
Maybe some sidechain compression to add to the pulsing of that mid?
Overall,I like the composition and the arrangement. Mere production work from there. Good Job!


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Ok, here is a little melodic drumstep. hoping for a final go around,but still unsure of the bass
Anyone got anything they are hearing I should be more aware of?

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Bah! Hate those reddit subs man...just misery. If you like it, that is all that matters. This new track has you seemingly taken a progressive house path. Dig it and have dabbled myself in it. Production wise it's a little muddy but could easily be cleaned up with EQ. Maybe some sidechain compression to add to the pulsing of that mid? Overall,I like the composition and the arrangement. Mere production work from there. Good Job!

Thanks, it's ok i guess, i'm sure a better producer could do more with this..

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Ok, here is a little melodic drumstep. hoping for a final go around,but still unsure of the bass Anyone got anything they are hearing I should be more aware of?

It's ok, though tbh nothing really stands out here. Production wise, when listening this with loud volume i feel to much high and highmids in the mix. Your mixes are clear and pretty good but often tend to be too crisp imo.

Thanks for the ears man and yea I tend to agree. I think sometimes I over compensate the highs because I think my lowend is taking over

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Thanks for the ears man and yea I tend to agree. I think sometimes I over compensate the highs because I think my lowend is taking over

What kind of setup are you mixing with?

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery What kind of setup are you mixing with?

Cans (SH HD 650's) that are starting to wear out =O(

Ah yes. Headphone mixing can be treacherous.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Some loud thing i did

Good work here mate

Drms sounding good

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 ----------------------------------------------- Ok, here is a little melodic drumstep. hoping for a final go around,but still unsure of the bass Anyone got anything they are hearing I should be more aware of?

Great synths

This is a really epic track

just sort the sizzle and put better drums in

I love the bass

Can you recommend a very good house / edm mastering service for this one guys

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