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Originally posted by TranceLover007 How is going Toby? - as far as your WIP work goes there is two things which draw my attention (or take away from the melodic part) - one is kick which could be a bit more thicker and second is this mid-bass line which vibrate (or has some LFO on it) a bit too much for my taste lol - the rest is slowly growing on me and after like third time I started to really like it Darek

Oh yeah, I forgot to mention nothing is properly balanced yet as it's purely a headphone mix at this point.

Not sure who Toby is, though.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery So this morning I was bored, so I started slicing up some breaks. Suddenly I had this in my hands.

Nice, but yeah, kick is distracting...

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery .......... Not sure who Toby is, though.

Sh**t man and sorry (Nik) lol, just completely space-out on this lol.

Darek

evo remix

So Ive finished the intro but now Im stuck on the break, the synths I have in the break are just placeholder, and I will be changing the break

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Originally posted by evo8 back to trance attempts

Me wants!

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Originally posted by Richard Butler evo remix So Ive finished the intro but now Im stuck on the break, the synths I have in the break are just placeholder, and I will be changing the break

yeah that current break wouldn't work at all imo, too trance for the style of track

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Originally posted by Woony Nice! could use a more earthy kick and more swing (both of which have been mentioned I guess ) The trance track is also nice - could use a string to develop it more. Did you use an arpeggiator? I'm not really getting the results I want with Ableton's Arp.

forgot to say - the arp there is z3ta's built-in. I use the Live one from time to time, what result are you looking for?
dont know if you M4L but i think there are more advanced arp units with, i never remember to use them......

v2 of the trancy one

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Originally posted by evo8 v2 of the trancy one

Nice one evo - not my style but I really appreciate this development, got some cool sound (and melody) to it.

Darek

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Originally posted by Richard Butler evo remix So Ive finished the intro but now Im stuck on the break, the synths I have in the break are just placeholder, and I will be changing the break

This is really far from what I would normally listen to but must agree with evo on this one - this break is not working with the main part but I really like that break

Darek

Some idea, rough mix

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Some idea, rough mix

Sounds cool.. Very pleasant to ear. Grooves well too. I like it.

Soundtest v2... Break is messed up a little, but i'm pretty satisfied generaly... What do you think?

Nice one. The sub is huge, maybe too much and imo overpowers the mix.
I like the open hat, very big as well. Nice atmosphere. You could play a bit more with some delays/reverbs to fill the gaps. Definitely has potential.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Soundtest v2... Break is messed up a little, but i'm pretty satisfied generaly... What do you think?

nice enough production, not sure im gonna on the style, its different

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Originally posted by evo8 v2 of the trancy one

Great vibe here. Now it needs a direction. The foundations are all there.

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Some idea, rough mix

kinda cool yeah

just i think, maybe around the 2-5k mark the mix is sticking out a bit, hats, kick transient, bongo/conga - very sharp to my ears - maybe just me

the bassline is beautiful, that arp as well really nice

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Originally posted by Richard Butler evo remix So Ive finished the intro but now Im stuck on the break, the synths I have in the break are just placeholder, and I will be changing the break

Not my cup of tea, but I admire your constant improvements. You always accept criticism and come back stronger.

Yeah, these transients definitely need some taming. Thank you for pointing it out.

dark tech-trance? i dunno

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Originally posted by TranceElevation Some idea, rough mix

It is really hard for me to comment on the style of this WIP but from technical perspective you have a bit to much high freq in it so far which in fact creates this piercing ear effect - also in your low freq you have some fighting going on between those elements (bass and sub-bass) - you would need to do some cleaning/separation in EQ for this to sound good - it is always nice to see improvement in your production and skills.

Darek

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Originally posted by evo8 dark tech-trance? i dunno

By now you know that techno/hard stuff in not my favorite style lol buy delivery (production quality) are pretty good evo - I have got to admit that

Darek

I guess I finally set my BPM to 128 and establish melody line for my upcoming track (same as previous concept but different approach lol)

Still no FX and fillers plus may have some small mixing issues but will address those later



Darek

sounds pretty relaxed, nice

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Originally posted by soulstar606 sounds pretty relaxed, nice

Just updated intro a bit so structurally make sense lol - appreciate your comment man.

Darek

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